by BlueWolfDancer4454
But I truly love your story and greatly appreciate all the work you put into these. Take as much time as u need to get am done, and I wish u the best of luck. Will be watching - Sol Ulyus
YAY more of my irregular fix is here!! with SEX!! lol jk man, its been a great story and the buildup and sexual tension makes it a VERY exciting read!!
Your characters are a joy to watch unfold. There are so many stories on Lit with all the depth of cardboard, and I struggle through some awful stories to find one like this.
Take as long as you need, and get it right. You will be prouder of that than you would be of publishing a poor story that appeals to a thoughtless audience.
I sent you a Pee Em...
Great chapter even with the cliffhanger there. It's gonna be a long week or so for the next installment.
I'm with everybody else here about Flint. I like to think he has an important part going forward.
Thank you again for the marvelous tale. The characters really come alive and the twists and turns in the plot are compelling.
Wonder how long until they figure out Dom is already an Alpha and that part of Flint's problem is that he is gay.
As soon as flint realizes he is gay his wolf will bond with him correctly
I sure hope to God that's what is going to happen. Poor kid. Nobody should be made to feel as low as he is. Makes me angry and wanting to cry for him all at the same time.
When someone will realize the "humans" have acted more like wolfs then the "wolfs" are. Of the characters in the story of course. I have rarely seen a group of wolfs that needs an infusion of new blood such as these. Makes this such an Awesome read.
Great chapter, can't wait to read the next one. I'm excited to see what's going to happen to Flint
Please don't let Flint die! I had to read the part about him twice because it was so painful to read - I could only skim through it the first time. Also, interesting twist with her alter ego- did not see that coming. I hope you go more into depth with that. I find her to be a very interesting character- Dom is as interesting to me,but Misty annoys me so much,that I am more interested in Samantha's story, with her hot twins. And if you don't want to hear your readers complain about you writing too slow or not writing long chapters - well that's just tough- it's your fault for being so good at writing! Lol
you don't finish a chapter in a satisfying way. I'm left anxious about what is going to happen next or uncomfortable about what just happened. It makes for a distressing wait for the next chapter. Maybe that can be something you work on in the future. Or maybe next time, you should wait to start posting until you have nearly finished the whole book, so the wait isn't so painful.
Still really enjoying the story but hating the (perfectly reasonable) wait.
Once Flint accepts that he is gay and realizes why one of Dom's guys (forget his name) smells so good, his wolf will bond with him. Wouldn't it be interesting if his wolf recognized Dom as alpha and not his dad?
Anxiously awaiting more.
Don't let Flint die! Let Garrett be his mate...a gay wolf would be better than him dying. Come on.....that's just breaking my heart...
Love your story. Don't like the wait. As much as I would like faster updates, I am more pleased that you don't sacrifice your to shorten the wait.
I'm thinking Flint has a 60/40 chance of surviving, but after this incident, the group will probably be separated so the wolves can get to their destined and then we might end up losing one from the group.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Queers make for solid 3-ways. It would be blasphemy to off the boy. I object! Vehemently! How else is a woman to herd together 2 males not terrified of having their cocks touch, for goodness sakes? Bugger the whale, rather save the homo-sexual male, I say!
...I gotta funny feeling that Flinty Boy is going to kick off to the hunting grounds in the sky. I hope not. Only time will tell.
On to the next.
Sincerely,
Payenbrant