All Comments on 'Rylee - Sapphic Love'

I only wish I could write with your fluidity. Though I prefer a bit more plot, your skill carried the story nicely. It was so sweet. It could use a few commas and the great artist was Michelangelo, one word, but that critique, those quibbles, just show how jealousy can cloud ones mind. Thank you

I really liked this story and hope you write a ch 2

Thank you for the constructive comment. I am only glad that you enjoyed it! As to Michelangelo... "Just a slip off the finger, seems to happen to me quite often!"

Aimie, this is nice. I enjoyed the read. Although, I don't know how realistic it is to move in with someone, perhaps even to a different country with them after one fuck. Herein, lies the irony, it's not realistic its fictional. I would love to read more.