All Comments on 'Safari Wife Ch. 02'

rates are their highest? hmmmmm, these lovely blue=eyed blonde wives must be geniuses! <p>

whereas before, it was just Black romeo's but now it is black romeo's and NON-CONSENT? ..... Sally you and your friends and these highly independent and successful women and wives are just so fuckin' romantic! <p>

Your racial and now non-consent mind-throbbin' EROTIC sex with romantic, big, domineering Black African hosts and bosses --- being "made" to suck and swallow half a dozen big handsome granit black men's seminal fluids and spit --- these daring and confifent women make me little heart thump so hard against me little chest....<p>

Gosh, these women and these stories, they are mind-bogglingly romantic! You go, sistas! Suck 'til they run dry and beg for mercy! LOL

now we know that HIV was not brought by the gays to the US. its from the white sluts who go to Africa, fuck everything, acquire and spread the desease, give it to their gay husbands and voila, AIDS in the US.

Wi th the aids and other S.T.D. infections running almost 80% you have already ended your story. You are told over and over what the risks are before and during any travling to the area.In real life she would tell her husband about chief and that would end her marriage,in your fantsey she fucks all of Africa cause she can't say no to black cocks now cause there so much bigger and better, than comes home pregnent, has the Zebra than hooks up with the local pimp,leaves baby with husband cause he knows his place,and continues to be a black cock slut. Your story is lame and I won't read any more anyway.

Now that was one HOT story. Your writing seems to be getting better with every story you write. Don't get upset over some of the bad comments that you have gotten from other readers. Those guys have to be homo's to not like this story. Maybe if you were to write a story about two guys getting it on they would give you a good vote. Keep it going it was great.

Well written great story, part two went a different direction than I thought it would, based part one and the first part of part two. the husband seems willing to share and was trying to get the wife to go along and she was starting to. Sooo,Suggestion.... Why not in part 3 let the wife backs off on all that juice at least enough where she still has some control and the husband is not passed out(keep him away from that stuff). Let the husband be awake so he can enjoy the show and also have some control over what it going on. Again, this is not meant to be a bad comment and I do not mean to take away from a really great story. Please do a part three!

Great story - More - more -more!

Take up an english course before you try writing again. A total mess. And those long punctuation gets on my nerves. Childish!!!

This wouldn't happen to be the up to the end 'truelife accounting' of that village that got slaughtered by the neighboring warring-tribe that claimed it went to war because of some poached wildabeasts??? Nasty, Nasty.

Oh; and even funnier: "Here mighty super sexy white bitch, have some excellerated and cultivated super gohneoreah; it won't kill you (at least not anytime soon) but will be deadly to all those assholes back stateside too good for their 'sistas' here or there."

One semi-famous african tribal-cheif-politician's favorite quote-question of philosophy...

"So why is it that everyone thinks white men have little dicks when white women are normally the only ones who can even accomodate such size and girth no matter what the skin color is...Do they all have the same gigantously dicked father (or family lines) and get that deepness in their dna or what? And why is there always that one white guy that can make any cock-slut 'go cold' from needing 'big-cock gangbangs' most of the time just rubbing and teasing them off without even having to fuck them before they are already cold to the world without the guy."

An interesting fellow to say the least.

Such nonsense and so crudely written. As a comedy, it would still be offensive to each race involved.<P>

The audience is different since your last "H" in 2004. We still look for arousal but now not to be offended by absurdity unless it is in the right category. Spelling upsets and distracts but also gives an issue to knock you for lots of reasons.<P>

Your pimp wimpily wants to sell you off for some black cock - now that sick male humiliation doesn't arouse semi-normal readers - it just angers that you expect us to be excited by his low - subhuman decision to be lower than snake shit. <P>

Brainless characters reflect sadly their writers thoughts on being excited. Does the husband being a self cuckster excite you? Could anyone respect him or you for being the scum of the earth. Well there are a few - a very few who are so addicted and jaded that it takes a sordid septic sick fetish to excite them. Is that you? I think not but what did you give us about what you think excites?<P>

I think you could have left him out of the absurd scum position you put him in and thus improved the story to where you want to - well I think you want to be respected for your ability and work - don't you?<P>

Please think about it.

I DON'T CARE WHAT ANYONE ELSE THOUGHT I ENJOYED THE STORY...

KEEP EM' CUMMING . DAMN PEOPLE IT'S ONLY A STORY

Excellent story. You really understand how the subconscious urges can overwhelm all other sensibilities and lead a woman into the best kind of bliss. That conflict of emotions and thoughts is increadibly erotic. Keep up the great work. And oh yeah... ignore the comments from the troglodites that have nothing but hateful words. They are completely clueless.

When I get to the end of your writng, I am looking desparately for another page to read. Great story!

The same story is stuck over on Dark wanderer.

It sucked there, too.

...what you try to write? You may need a psychologist if you do, 'cause you're nuts. This isn't hot, it's sordid and very offensive to African sensibilities. Any way you look at it, the woman was raped over and over again, and you think that's hot? You're the kind of preditor that your government should put behind thick walls and never let out to see the light of day again.

Loved reading the story, hope you continue writing. Maybe keep the husband out of the loop, cuckold stories are not interesting.

Very well written. Seems like a true story ? Lots of erotic talents.Keep up the good work.

Mr.Sam P.

kinkykingfisher@yahoo.com

i do not care about the critics on writing style or the content. the story made me horny and that is why iread them. i only wished it were true and i was hank and woke up in time to clean the dick off of ya'll mixture and then to suck all the combined juices from your pussy.

KEEP THE STORY COMMING. I THINK THE YOUNG BUCKS THAT JACKED OFF WHILE WATCHING HER SHOULD GET SOME OF HER PUSSY.

Please keep this story going.It is very erotic and such a great story.This is what Hank wanted all along right?!!!!

Also Hank should drink some of that stuff and get to experince the Native women running around naked.Dont you think?Also she had the chief and their guide,dont most tribes have a witch doctor or a medicine man?Just a thought..lol

Great Keep it Up a total turn on.

Bring a daughter into it. And make sure she drinks the tribes juices . Great Work

I can't stop reading. I absolutely love your woman's first person point of view. There are plenty of the same type of writing style on this site, but few of them are as good as yours.

Best author on the site. We have waited too long for this story. Please continue with it.

Yesssssss!

Im going to go against the flow of the responses from other readers and say I think its great to end it right now. I think you have an excellent ending and attempting to get too much out of the african scenario might dilute it and its good now. However, please write some more and disregard the politically correct evangalistic types that somehow seem to find their way into this site.

Bobbygn333@hotmail.com

I sure hope you write more VERY hot

take my wife with you next time!

I love the story. The hot sexiness of her losing control and letting it all happen is very exciting. The idea that she could be knocked up from her lapse of control and come home from her trip with her belly filled and some tough decisions to make, all the while feeling the fruit of her indiscretion growing within her. Well, I think its hot and sexy.

Your 4 part story was really hot. And give me a weblink for the kekpa lol; I'll order at least a 6 pak! rotfl

Anyway, a real hot story that got me thinking about having a wonderful time, and wishing I was there.

Now, I think I'm going to go read all your other stories that are on your Literotica site. If they're all a good as Safari Wife, I'm going to be busy for a while, but thoroughly enjoying myself. Thanks again!

She got H.I.V. now its not so exciting or sexy.

Please continue....you should add some breeding to the story. African tribals breeding a white woman would be really hot.

you just became my favorite author....

Sorry, I have to laugh at the English majors.......This is a very sensual and exciting story of a tranforrmation....It truly turned me on !!

Thank you for writing it

Candy

lots more please love it

great story i think most white women would love this story loved her getting it several times by black guys....... happened to my wife and two security guards who caught her with a few items in her bag not paid for so she paid for it in other way now she loves black cox..back to the story seems like the wife will be fucked more and more.

i loved you story and i liked all of your stories ans mostly like the description you gave of how it felt when they entered you with ther dicks so keep on doing that and write some mor stories for us and dont be discouraged by the critics

What a wonderfully horny story. Those mighty mighty black cocks certainly have a way of changing a girl. What a hot story.

Please keep writing!! I've had this fantasy and you made it come to life!

Why the hell don't you read some of the good writers and emulate, if you cannot create. "1*".

What is up with these morons who pick faults like she will get HIV? This is an erotic story and they are the world's sick nit-pickers. Let me tell you why they hate your stories. It is because their wives got sorry of their sorry arses and spread their legs wide apart for some handsome brute to give them a real fuck.

They cannot get the picture out of their heads of their lovely wives going at like horny rabbits with another man. They blame their wives, of course they do. They call them sluts and whores and any other name they can dig up. The one thing they never blame is themselves and their inability to fuck good enough to keep their wives anywhere near happy.

If one of these useless morons is reading this comment think about this:

Think about that day you found out that your wife had been opening her legs for that other guy maybe while you was at work. Think about his tight sexy arse right between her thighs bunging her up. Then think about him pulling out after his cock has gone slack and then think about the thick spunk emerging from her slit and trickling onto the bedsheets. Then take a step back for once in your sorry lives and blame your fucking selves.

Having said that the vast majority of reviewers loved your story.

I would have given it 50* if I could.

can't wait for 3 & 4 and for hubby to watch!

It was extremely well written and exciting. I loved it so much. Keep the good work.

This bitch think it can write ? Bah !! 1* .

Damn this story had me sooo hot and wet...I fingered myself to 5 orgasms while reading this one !

Please more 🐃💨💨💨😜

Oh hell yeeeeessssss, please continue with more chapters ( like maybe 03 & 04 ) or more. You've got me hooked with my cunt wet as an ocean. I don't care what that honey was they put on her pussy and nipples but I sure wish I could get hold of some. Maybe I could put some on my hubby's cock and see how many times he can get it up in one night. WOW that would be one HOT FUCK or more. Waiting for more to cum.

Great story, you should continue.

Salaciously sexy as she steps outside boundaries yet remains emotionally entangled with her hub. Interesting spin that the drug heightens her libido so she acts outside her usual limits - so is blameless as she enjoys oh-so-satisfying fucks. Nice creativity, thank you

in Sally Tart Stories their is no HIV no one ever gets pregnant No Aids, it is a story dick heads.

I loved it Hot Sexy Slut Wife.

It ticked all my boxes

No wasted thoughts... Damn near perfect... I so loved it and the others in this series! Thank You...

Not sure why some folks seek perfection in the writing of these stories. They don't cost anything to read; so just move on if you object. I enjoyed these first two, as I can imagine how her pussy would have been filled up first with large black cocks, then with copious amounts of virile seed. Keep up the great story telling and I look forward to more erections.

I'd love this to happen to my wife. bkforher@hotmail.com if you would like to do this to her.

Wow absolutely loved it! The husband should have sucked some too!

Sad husband didn't watch, exciting read

I'm a late comer to your stories, but so far I'm enjoying them. 5*~~JBEdwards