All Comments on 'Safehouse'

by leapingfox

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Hmmm?

Not sure what to think about this. The sex was great but thinking that they are going to die was a bit distracting. I will have to hold judgement until another part is posted (Is there going to be another part?)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Scorching hot !!!

Eros and Thanatos in a sexual embrace !!!

The hint of optimism at the end is welcome !

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Short and sweet

and hot and tender

yeti8080kyeti8080kover 15 years ago
No second part needed

You write my favorite kinds of story. Short and realistic, with open endings that are nevertheless hopeful.

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