All Comments on 'Saga of Littown Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Fantasys are great

Your play with literary license is outstanding. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
And stuff....

Sone arguments sound so strange but the added stuff really does bring a change. And so does a womans ass in volleyball shorts, no argument there! Didn't expect to see the MC so wrought out to be asleep with no sexy time, better cur back on those life threatening orgasms in scool if he wants to live to tell the tale.

5*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great

Great sexy silliness. That's ok though cause I'm only reading and doing other sexy things cause I'm studying for a degree 😁.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 7 years ago
Fun to read

Great job

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Read it!

Lame?

Absolutely!

Stupid?

Oh yes!

A huge waste of data storage and your time?

Yep.

But at least.... Well, no buts... It is horrible.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
The scene in the table fort in the lunch room....

....was absolutely outstanding. Lighting candles for ambiance, just was a great feature!!! Thanks so much for sharing.

SquidkibbleSquidkibbleabout 7 years ago
Yyou're stupid (and I like it)

Everyone needs a couple stuoid days and considering your work you deserve it. However, I will wait patiently for the day you return full fury with good heartfelt incest works.

TheTunTheTunabout 7 years ago
spoof

This is a spoof story like what loaded weapon is to lethal weapon

horned_lizardhorned_lizardabout 7 years ago
The satire is strong in this one

I love how you constantly mock how incest is totally wrong and not hot at all. The fourth wall breaking is also very well done and oddly organic.

blackknight314blackknight314about 7 years ago
We didn't have a dad.

Really, they just lesbian touched their pussies together.

What ever happened to not letting your cock be hard for more than 4 hours? At least that's what the E D Meds say. Oh well... when is Jai going to fuck his mother, aunt and oldest sister?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I don't normally comment

But fucking hell your lampooning of the writers of this site have me rolling on the floor in laughter... I don't know how anyone gives you less than five stars... this is fucking amazing!!!

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