All Comments on 'Sagging Boobs, Ugly Nipples Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Maybe a bit formulaic, but .....

.... I really enjoy this story (and your others) for good, fun and light-hearted reads. Being well written, they are easy to read. Please keep them coming...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
He bought her the car and she won't let him drive it?

She's turning into quite the selfish bitch, isn't she.

Sidney43Sidney43over 11 years ago

Really liking the story, but have to mention the occasional switch between Norma and Norman. Stella is getting her just rewards and she deserves it in spades.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome

You're the bomb, Q. You keep writing them; I'll keep reading them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Define "Coming Soon"

So, what is your definition of "Part 3 Coming Soon"????

It's because WE CARE.....I do enjoy your writing, and while I've been waiting for parts 3 for a couple of stories, you managed to write a couple of new stories, good stories, great stories, but.....

We're WAITING!!!!

nadaliwnadaliwover 11 years ago
*****

This is such a great story.

bruce22bruce22over 11 years ago
Fun Read

But I have to admit that her comment about being married to the bank and her refusal to let him drive her car would make me wary of tieing the knot with her!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Comments so far are spot on except driving the Mustang...

qhml1,

Great fun! Hope you are having as much fun as I/we reading it.

Thanks for sharing on Lit.

x

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Inquiring Minds Want to Know

Who are Norman and Carley? What is a Grimlin?

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
WITH EVERY INCREASING TICK-TOCK

it brings us one closer to the Alarm.TK U MLJ LV NV

OldfatanduglyOldfatanduglyabout 9 years ago
By your selection of a car.....

You just became StangStar's hero for life!

sbrooks103sbrooks103almost 9 years ago
Thoughts

“Getting screwed out of the business” – She didn’t get screwed out of the business, she GOT the business, then lost it!

It was probably Stang who recommended the car!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

May I just say DITTO without getting kicked off line? you are magnificent.

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

Sak77Sak77over 8 years ago
To those not getting the "in-joke" . . .

That guy? The one in Michigan? The one who threatens to hunt Charlie down and kill him if the car is not cared for? That IS StangStar06!! LOL

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
ch 02 2nd read

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Wonderful

I've read most all of your stuff an love it all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Very Good! !

Nice tip of the hat to StangStar06. Sorry, the story GREAT. THANK YOU

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
it keeps getting better. - fun

What is her foul weather car?

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xalmost 6 years ago
Dope Slaps For Me!

Although I did suspect, I don't know why I didn't KNOW that it was Stang, LOL!

I can understand the cop going easy on her, but why just a warning? He could have given her a ticket for TEN over the limit, saved her the killer penalty.

This isn't Loving Wives, so I don't expect much revenge from Stella.

Grimjack01Grimjack01over 4 years ago
Nice revenge

I like this romance and a bit of BTB also, nice mix.

MarkT63MarkT63almost 4 years ago
Great!!!

BTB!!! Nice to have the money to make your bitch ex bleed; figuratively!!!

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Ticking Along Very Nicely

Enjoying the ride and just waiting for the drama involving Stella to unfold.

WetheNorthWetheNorthalmost 3 years ago
A good proof read would have made it much better

Unless Norma keeps changing her name to Norman?

NitpicNitpicalmost 3 years ago
Why

Why does Norma keep getting called Norman?.

SDN1955SDN1955about 2 years ago

Nice understated shoutout to StangStar.

dgfergiedgfergieabout 2 years ago

What's with all these mustangs, how about a GTX or a Dodge charger with the 440 or thee hemi?? Maybe even an old GTO?

Pussy_WhispererPussy_Whispererover 1 year ago

The most brilliant line I have ever read on here is likely "You were so busy breaking into the vault, you forgot you were married to the bank."! Love it

AmbivalenceAmbivalence3 months ago

"Yes, after I told him he had no choice. Gotta take charge early, Norma, before they try to grow a spine."

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Good thing that bit was followed by the next bit or I'd imagine one or both of them would fail to remain being married.

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Norma laughed, knowing if David told her to do something she would do it instantly.

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