All Comments on 'Sally's Sr. Sex - More Darren'

by twistedgraygoat

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

I understand the perspective of tgg encouraging Sally to maintain a healthy sex life but really, when all you ever have him do is open up the bedroom door while an 18 year old kid is underneath his 60-something g wide and squeal "Pancakes in 30 minutes!", could you POSSIBLY disrespect and emasculate the man any further?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
proof read

The author needs to do some proof reading, in locations its 'tgg' and others 'Tgg' if this is a name reference then the latter is the proper form and should be used.This becomes very distracting and subtracts from the story.

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