All Comments on 'Sam and Edward Ch. 03'

please continue. I'd love to see a second chapter of The Ambassador and a third of The Neighbours

Amazing. Can't wait for the next part!!!

Great story, I could see an want to see this story play out a lot longer.

Go on, please ;)

So what happens next

Can't wait for the sequel

Pls, don't keep us waiting. Post the next chapter.

If you're going to do a cuckold story try and make it believable, this is total childish crap. Give up already.

cheers nigga fagg

You did good, steviet, don't stop! It will be nice if we see the next chapter in the near future)

. . . a truly loving interracial/cuckold fantasy tale taken to its ultimate conclusion.

Good job.

Oh my, this cries out for a last chapter. After taking the relationship this far, going through thinking it over, hubby needs to ditch the birth control, arrange a date and assist Edward in the breeding of his wife

Hope this story isn't done as the ending would seem rushed. Very much enjoying this one, very dynamic natural flow. One of the better writers in this category, keep it up.

Repressed homosexual fantasy for yucks.

Excellent!!!!!!!!!!

Any chance to get chapter 4? ;-)

Can't we have more? I don't like this cliffhanger, and please don't say it's an open ending.

I can't imagine this ever stopping! Please write more soon!

And thank you!

Cheers!

Please, chapter 4 and several more like this.

One of the best on Lit.

What happens when they get back? Dos she leave her husband to sort out her future, or will she go home? Is she knocked up?

For fiction to be good it has to have a small piece reality to be believable this has nothing, except the sick ramblings of a submissive retard. Leaving all morality out of it, even for a cuckold story, some of which are excellent, this is sick.

Please write another chapter!!!

need to finish this, a chapter four and maybe five,

You can't finish here ... more more more please.

You may have grown bored, but please continue. Perhaps Sam purchases a chastity cage for hubby? Just a thought

The best story I have read. Absolutely loved the story line and pace.

Please continue the great work.

I found it a very erotic well written story hope there is more of this cpl

Sir, you seem to have a very good understanding of a Cuckold, you know exactly what turns a husband to make him a Cuckold, I am a cuckold to a loving women and you understand what we need. I suppose to make me more controlled my wife with my own desires and wants has made me into a full sissy feminized Cuckold which I know makes me totally submissive to her and her lover. I do accept the humiliation of her lover knowing and seeing me feminised, even my man clothes for non working times outside the house have little feminine touches getting me used the the day when I will go out with them dressed. Oh I am 26 my wife is 23.

Thank you keep it up you are well researched.

After having Edwards baby she will continue to fuck him every time she takes the child to visit him.

Becoming pregnant again and eventually she will leave her husband and move in with Edward. thereby denying her husband the ability to see their daughter

Whilst cuckolding can be fun it can be as addictive as heroin and just as destructive to a relationship

Not sure why some people say they want more chapters of the story. Personally, I am relieved this was the end. It was difficult to read and not because I don’t read well. It was absolutely a steaming pile of crap. The story lacked believability, eroticism, and just plain common sense. The only thing I can say that’s positive about the story was that it was pretty short and thankfully there are no more chapters to read.

We need more, please.

Shite

100 stars for writer. Great fantasy. But she will eventually make the complete change.

Shame there is not the final chapter -part 4

It always amazes me that people who don't care for the interracial genre are appalled when at the end of the story the wife is hooked while the husband is pushing her to continue. Do they read three chapters all the while thinking it won't end the way they usually do? Here's a hint. 95% of the IR stories that score the highest end up with a hooked wife loving the enormous black cock and the inexhaustible man attached to it. If you don't like that ending then don't bother reading them. We all know you don't feel guilty till you've jacked yourself silly then decide to write a scathing comment condemning the story(s) you just read.

Steviet's writing is genius in how he moves the story along and covers the bases as he goes. The reader is left wanting more every time. Your fans want more chapters for this story!

This is a fantastic series. Although the story needs some editing the plot and character development along with the pace were spot on. Keep writing. I'd love to read chapter four.

Would love to have read the next chapter....great story

Absolutely fantastic series that I pray you continue to add too! Bravo!

What a wonderful story! So hot! So beautiful! So erotic! Please write the next chapter soon.