All Comments on 'Sam Gets Married'

Shows great promise. Should be continued. Dick-thickening erotica, just what we come here for.

Deserves to be continued.....by all means....

Hope you write a sequel!!!!!!! Some suggestions: Jimmy sex secret could be that he likes it rough or doing Sam's ass, Let Namoi and Barb get pregnant, letting Mr. Ross enjoy their milk and their horniness

Your style is very nice... Thank you!

This is one hell of a good story!! And yes, you really must continue this story!!

Suggestions....hmmmm.....Well, Sam just might like getting spanked or like someone else said , she might like it anally. The girls, Babs could come up pregnant and Naomi could just move in with Mr R on a trial basis to see how the other girls take to her new role. Of course, Sam has to come back home and tell Daddy what is kinky about Jimmy and then Daddy has to expand on that with her and teach her how to enjoy it.

Damned good story man keep it up!!! (lol)

You can't leave us haninging ... you have to continue the story, no matter what the direction.

loved it.please continue get them all pregnant and let them keep loving each other.

Definitely continue this wonderful story!

Scouries:

When I see your name on a story I'm attracted like a moth to the flame and you never disappoint me. By all means this story needs to be expanded. Hell it could probably go 5 or 6 chapters without wearing thin, but then you're so could at it you would have no problem carrying it off. Thank You. Ronnie W.

your a great story teller ... hmmmmmmmmmmm are you mr.r ?? buth girls pregnant and sam;s husband kinky with bondage..

Please write more..I would love to hear how it continues...What happens with Sam? Does Naomi end up pregnant with Mr. R's baby? Does he consent to getting Barb pregnant?

this story was great you have to do a follow up to it could turn into quiet an epic

Scouries Great begining story yes many chapters it can become. Teach Noami love and great sex marry her to mr r and let the three girls intertrine their lives with mr r

Great story. You seem to like 3-girl tales, eh?

Wherever your imagination leads, it'll be good.

I might let Jimmy be so weird that she leaves him, and comes home to Daddy. But she want more of Daddy's cock!

Not sure how I'd get Babs there, but she'll have to be a regular visitor and get her share.

And Naomi, already pregnant can be Sam's new 'mother'. I think they'd all love that... ;-)

A nice little harem, all having his babies. Plenty of milky titties for him - and the others? - to drink from.

No anal, please - he'd have enough pussy to fill, anyway! I'm not into weird stuff.

And could you write in slightly shorter chunks (2 Lit pages) for us slower readers, please?

...please, please make them all pregnant by Mr. R at the same time! How cool would that be? I'm so fuckin' hot right now that I want to get knocked up! Maybe tonight!

a sequel would be great!

Great story! Naomi should marry Mr. R, Barb should have his baby, and so should Sam, as she finds that not only is her hubby sterile, but he can only come when Sam is giving him a blow job.

This was a very good story. I don't really care what scenario happens a sequel must be written.

although a late cumer to your stories...i had read the flarethy(sp)story a while back and loved it, for some reason i just never got back to your stories, i guess getting a new computer...finding all my fav authors i bookmarked..AGAIN...thank you DK...i adore this story..imagine that Daddys lil girl AND her best friends and although i haven't read on to the other chapters yet...i would say YES YES YES to all of your questions marry her,make a baby,share the bed etc etc...oh yes the secret...hmmmm it will be interesting to say the least. Can't wait. respectfully and enjoying this. a fan in Texas naynay

Very Hot! Naomi needs to marry Mr R. Both Sam and Babs should carry his child, along of course, with his wife, Naomi. BUT, of all things continue! PLEASE! This is Great Stuff!

I give my comments before reading the next part.

Great beginning, but this story needs to be expanded!I would say YES to all of your questions. Primarily Naomi should marry Mr. R and the rest should follow from there. The way things are going, Mr. R and his beautiful harem are going to have a very milky diet! Scouries, you are a master!

Excellent story, very erotic. Good character development, always good to have that, no matter what the story. Makes me hard, for sure. Yes, have a sequel, or two. The plot needs to be expanded. Write on!

only 1 should have a baby! and the others only you could say. very good story line.

What happens next??? I want the sequel =D

Everything was great except for one aspect. The anticipation was hot, not just having them all jump Mr. R's bones immediately. My one issue is the mention of pregnancy. It's so unrealistic when these stories act like these chicks, and I don't just mean the chicks in your story, would want to get pregnant. Sex is hot. Trying to conceive with your wife I am sure can be hot at times. Getting knocked up during affairs, including incestual affairs, is not hot. Does anyone else agree? Otherwise, great work.

I have read and enjoyed most of your work with Sam as a main character. I would only comment that having bonked the old man, perhaps it is time for Naomi and Barb to stop calling him "sir" - don't you think? Regards, M

I want more please I want to know everything.

All of your stories are top notch, but this one was especially good. I hope there is a sequel.

Great story, but i dont get what was wrong with the newlywed guy

Definitely do a sequel. He needs to get all three in bed at once. Some lesbian action would be good, too. And I'm all for him getting all three pregnant.

I hope you write about Mr.R and Naomi, and about all the other people in the story because it was really very, very good. Keep writing more good stories!!!

What can I say except - another great piece of writing and a great story line - Keep this one going - I'm sure you can get quite a few diversive chapters from this story

more about all the characters - give all the girls a baby by Mr R.- maybe a boy and 2 girls and have the boy and Mr R. carry on their "work" with the daughters - wow - wouldn't that be fabulous - but definitely more please

without a doubt, please please write more....

everything you asked is something id like to kno! so make the second story already!

Just loved this story!! Hope All the girls have more encounters with Mr. R. You have a great start to a fine story!!

yeah another good story first time i read this one, yeah would be nice them ideas you posted after the ending havnt read the sequel yet at least i think its a sequel since similar name and storyline anyway keep up the fine writing and ill keep up the reading haha

YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY MATTER OF FACT ALL YOUR STORIES KEEEP IIIITTTT CUMMMMMMMING LOL

yep gotta read more of this

This is great story-telling that builds to a wonderful climax (pun intended) :D

Just can't get enough of you ... fabulous story-telling and always leaves a desire for MORE ! I Love the story build-up as always and I would Love it more if the actual (the Important part) of SEX would be a little more explicit, detailed to raise the excitement to another level. Never the less no complaints from you SIR !

Daddy needs to impregnate all 3 of his girls. As always your stories are so well done. Thank you.

I love the defloration of Naomi. That little detail about her blood running down his balls is deeply arousing; I'm really hard, and in the mood for an inexperienced young lady like Naomi. There's no pleasure in the world greater than a marriage of conquest with orgasm.

Mr. R needs to arrange for the girls to come over as often as possible. Naomis Mom throws her out of the house when her belly starts to show. She moves in with Mr. R. Samntha spends time at home w Daddy and making love w him until she is sure he has implanted her before she lets hubby take off his condoms. Barb has her problems w her husband when he suspects the big belly is not his, and she also moves in w Mr. R. eventually, Naomi's mom relents and comes over to see her daughter, but instead, has a few glasses of wine and ends up on mr R's pole, from which, she also is implanted. Mr. R ends up with a ton of breast milk and never a dull moment.

I didn't enjoy the story; I did. Still, I have two objections/observations. First, the relationship between the father and the three girls was so highly sexualized for years that the long delay until they had sex was unconvincing. That these girls, who have no hang ups about flashing their bodies or sex, had not crawled into Dad's bed long before the wedding seems inexplicable. Second, and for much the same reason, the story had no tension. Not only did we know that everyone was going to end up in the sack -- it is erotica after all -- but there was no obstacle to overcome in doing so. As I said, the only question was why they had not already done so.

YES A SEQUEL IS NEEDED. I FEEL THAT ALL THREE GIRLS ARE GOING TO HAVE HIS BABY AND MAYBE THEY WILL ALL MOVE I WITH HIM.

RON TEXAS cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

As an 87 year old retired chef, I learned, in my kitchen days, that you can't please everyone, nor should you try. There is only one person you should please, and that is yourself.

IF you are pleased with your product, that is the epitome of success. Some will find fault, and others will praise. Usually, those who find fault, also find fault with all things, and are unhappy. Those who praise are generally those who enjoy life and the ups and downs it brings.

If you enjoy what you read, or taste, may the Gods be with you. If you find fault with what you read, or taste, it will not be the Gods that are with you.

Its good enough to make him happy then what does it matter be happy with your product but don't post negative comments to others when they enjoy their products let scouries revel in the good comments not worry about the bad ones

Oh, I hope a sequel will be written one day....

I loved the story line. I liked the fact that even though there were 3 girls none was neglected in the exploits. Very well written too.

Sam will get hurt by jimmies dark side daddy needs to ride to the rescue and find away to marry all three each having his baby. Watch spelling teachers read this too

A number of Jim's stories surprise me, and this was one of them. I expected it to be good, but I didn't expect it to be a favorite until near the end, when it became obvious it had to be one.

A little too much self aggrandizing for my taste. After 5 paragraphs of how awesome dude is I stopped reading.

five stars

please get your pen out and at least another 2 episodes.

I'm your big fan

please make this a series I love this story

Another well-written story, a nice read. I've never really been into daddy-daughter themes but you seem to be doing a pretty good job writing them. One critique though the story ended too abruptly IMO, but I guess you were setting it up for the sequel, good job then. 5 stars.

Absolutely amazing. This deserves at least a trilogy.

Amazing truly very interesting and nice

Loving the story. AAAAA++++

I loved it! That was so sexy. The story feels very fresh. Great read!

Stupid Sam should have been with Daddy from the start