All Comments on 'Same Name'

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Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptabout 12 years ago
Nice.

It was a nice little story. I liked it.

WyldMTWyldMTabout 12 years ago
GREAT STORY!

I thought it was great. Happened to me once (double booked room) but I didn't get as lucky as Jerry...only a free room. Keep up the great writing!

apollonaapollonaabout 12 years ago
Lovely

And very entertaining. Thank you.

bruce22bruce22about 12 years ago
MGM hits the spot!

As always! You know this guy did not get too badly damaged in exchange for

a valuable lesson! Still what does he know about Jerri?

JusttooldJusttooldabout 12 years ago
good

It's good to have a story with a bit of humour in it. Do more please.

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRiderabout 12 years ago
Cute.

Well worth the read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great story.

Loved it! A very good read.

shaman43shaman43about 12 years ago
A complaint

Too short a story for one that was so entertaining and enjoyable to read. Was getting that good feeling smirk on my face from reading a great story and the damn thing ended. GGGrrrr. Top marks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Bruce

He knows enough. He hasn't asked her to marry him - just made a date to explore further. Now we can hope Triple M writes a second story about wading through a long range relationship that turns into a close range permanent relationship.

JonTaylorJonTaylorabout 12 years ago
Yoour Usual Excellence

Nice little story. Begs for a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
nice short story

I liked it but it needs a ending or a new begining..

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyabout 12 years ago
lovely

this was a nice little stiry i enjoyed it very much, I rather hope there is more coming .

magmamanmagmamanabout 12 years agoAuthor
First...

Sorry again for the typos, I ran back through this three times and still missed some.

Probably because I will be 70 soon and my 2.5 power glasses need to be stronger.

For those of you who wish some sort of ending? This story was about a beginning, who knows where it could end? In my mind, the part that leaves a smile on my own face is the "Perhaps?"

Stories of moments in life all end the same, one day with memories and then the final transition. I could write that, it would be easy.

"They lived happily ever after."

LoL

No sequel, none needed here, I am off to another idea.

Thanks,

MGM

gatorhermitgatorhermitabout 12 years ago
Very Nice

Interesting read and funny. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Nice story

I disagree with some of the others. While a sequel could work, leaving it as is allows the imagination to take it to what ever destination one wishes.

I always look forward to your stories and click on them even if the title doesn't catch my eye. All I need to see is your name as author. Thanks for the enjoyment.

katibkatibabout 12 years ago
NICE

Nice writing--leave it the way it is!

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
THE NAME GAME

is best when paid by others. TK U MLJ LV NV

SpykkeSpykkeabout 12 years ago
A nice, succinct

well tempoed story. No sequel is necessary, indeed I think it would spoil things.

cantbuymycantbuymyabout 12 years ago
liked it

you get a 5 - short and sweet.

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 12 years ago
As much as I want to see it work for them -

Leave it alone - it is great as it is -

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
A SNAFU TURNS INTO A NEW STORY

and romance for 2 travelers, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A fuck up

Turns out to be good for both of them.....funny and very enjoyable....

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Cute story!

You got in, told the story, got out. Nothing extra. Great job!

QuintiusQuintiusover 4 years ago
Cute story

I felt they got over their anger at one another a little quickly but it didn't ruin anything. They were nice together. Hopefully they'll be able to find a way to get together more permanently. Good work.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

A fun story that did what it was supposed to do, entertain. I guess the ending was as good as could be expected but it would have been nice to see it taken further.

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