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Anonymousabout 9 years agoDecent concept, but..
Too much switching tense from past to present and back,and a rather abrupt ending. A good editor could make it world of difference in the story.
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hannsg@hannsgAll through school I hated English class and writing stories was painful. Now I am writing stories for pleasure and wished I would have paid attention in class.
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