All Comments on 'Santa's Stand In'

I'm always left wanting the story to continue. Thank you!

Loved how the story developed, you kept me hard the whole time. Hope there is a sequel.

that was not only hot, but lovely and sweet as well.

Could Grant's last-minute Santa's helper job have been any better? I'd say he lucked into the best job ever.

Imaginative and erotic Christmas story. Good luck in the contest.

Absolutely loved this story. Sounds like Lara is a kinky girl. I think I speak for any man who reads this that we'd all love read more about Grant and Lara and the naughty shit they'd get into. I wonder what they'd be like outside of work.

Hot, erotic, naughty, and yet sweet. very nice job.

Like another comment I read, I really hope this story continues.

And yes, good luck with the contest (even though I'm in it too, lol)

;->

Melanie and Wendy could have fun teaching the Virgin more tricks and the young lady the finer things of why finding a hard man is better to find than, wasting time looking for that good man who is hard to find but no good

Makes one want to play Santa, especially if there is a sexy elf around. Nicely done.

Melanie or Lara? Proof reading your own submission might help.

Nice story, and every man's fantasy. Now we need to see Melanie and Lara expand our scrawny hero's horizons.

Great story and a great Xmas ending. Great writing. Thank yoy

Nikki, you are an excellent writer. I really enjoy your stories … plot, character development, and the anticipation or the eventual sex. Well done!

Good tale, lots of well written chat, liked it