by SluttyBisexualGuy
That was amazing. Quite simply the best erotic short fiction I've read in recent years, replete with humor, intelligent word usage AND concepts, and crafted well, to boot. Well damned done.
Of all the stories I've read, this is by far one of, if not THE best one I've read!!! I loved it but would like to have seen the ending last a bit longer. Hmmm maybe there will be a part 2 for New Years? 5 stars!!!
EXCELLENT!!!
Beautifully written, with interest from start to finish.
Thank you for publishing your work on this site.