All Comments on 'Sara Flies the Friendly Skies'

You never cease to amaze me Sara as you open up more with every story of yours.

Coffee, Tea or me takes on a new outlook to me all of a sudden:-)

Try SUCKSY SaraCD, because this sure sucks!

The overall story was great, and very sensual. However there were so many words missing that I began to question if English isn't your first language. Take more time in your proofreading and editing (even going as far as to getting a native English speaker to proofread and edit if itnisnt your first language). The story had a lot of potential, but the constant barrage of missing words detracted from it so much that it bordered on becoming unreadable. Keep it up and good luck