All Comments on 'Sara Gets What She Wants'

i want a girl like that

That was amazing.

Great story well written more please

Great story! You are going to get from flamers because of the theme but, continue writing. You are set up for the sequel.

What a wonderful,sexy story. For me the very essence of my fantasies

This is my first story, I'd love any feedback you have!

Really liked this story. It makes you feel like you are present and part of the action.

Awesome first story! Keep it up, you have a lot of talent

I'm a little disappointed Sara didn't have a tranny friend to break in her hubby instead of Josh.

Great story:-)

I want that with a couple.

Good job! Love forced bi-themes. Very good first submission.

You are a very talented writer! I really love your subtle details that really take you into this journey into his complete intoxication with, and submission to her. Deliciously erotic and heady!

I can't wait to read more from you!

Great sense of progression. Your story builds very nicely in action. This is a very smoothly written story. You developed your characters well giving them more depth which added to the intensity. Very nice. Thank you for your writing.

This is the thing I desire most. I need a Sara in my life.

Truly a well written story! Such wonderfully nuanced details and as litfan said; 'A great sense of progression and build up.' You made it all very believable and erotic at the same time. So glad you've decided to share your stories with us here. (Only question would be the choice of BDSM as the category. I think your score and reception would have been much better in Gay Male, as there really wasn't much BDSM content. But no big deal ;)

Great story. Well written and so fucking hot!!

You have a real talent for writing. Great character development. More please.

You have a real talent for writing. Great character development. More please.

This was very well written and a pleasure to read. You accurately described that sense of need to be lovingly dominated that i feel so keenly myself. This is how i would love to be dominated. The fact that Sara continues to gently push her submissive into accepting her control is just what i wish for too. This story has summed up my fantasy almost to the letter. Outstanding!

That was a fun read, and I’m looking forward to part two. I really liked your character development. With the endless quarantine good writing is appreciated, thank you.

Great sexy couple!

Love their sex play and hoping you share more of their fun time together!

Simply LOVE your stories - THANKS

I'm really enjoying your writing you bring the characters to life and the sex scenes are great

The writing is superb. It's so natural and relatable that it's easy to miss just how well crafted both the writing and the story are. The story offers a powerful and empathetic perspective that's largely unfamiliar to me. I didn't expect to enjoy the sensuality as much as I did. I also didn't expect to find so many things I could relate to. When the narrator described that subtle shift that occurs in just a look, when the relationship slips into the Dominant/submissive dynamic, I knew exactly what he meant. I don't think I've ever read it described as simply and effectively. When the narrator described some of the things he wanted - instinctively and without knowing why - I could understand that. I was surprised to be able to see a bit of myself in the narrator. It was all the little details, so skillfully and unobtrusively woven in, that made the story relatable, engaging and sexy.

@Enchantment_of_Nyx, thank you so much for your kind words! I love your stories and appreciate the feedback! I'm particularly pleased that you felt like the D/s dynamic was captured accurately, since ultimately that's why this story is in this category. Glad to know that you found it so relatable :)

Wonderful! I wish that was me experiencing cock for the first time, with my wife encouraging it.

I so miss being fucked by a woman with a strap on or a man.

Absolutely amazing

Yes...without a doubt I would love to have this exact scenario happen. I’m so ready to suck my first real cock. Curiosity is over. I’m ready for a real cock. Yes...I will unload their balls all night, gladly. I love to eat my own cum so the natural progression is to suck it out of an all natural real hard cock. Empty balls and a full belly is my desire. Just give me my chance. I’ll make you happy time and time again. I’ll be at your becon call or text. I’m ready!

Thanks so much for keeping it safe, sane, and consensual and also gentle and loving. I dislike the usual femdom tropes, severe beatings, verbal degradatio , long term denial, feminization, humiliation, cruelty. Hate all that stuff but i do like stories about sub guys taking sexual orders from bossy sexy ladies. I love the communication and her checking on consent. The story was very hot ans well written as others have stated.

Great, sexy story. Loved it.

Just curious, what was forced about this story?

Fantastic would luv to be involved with a scenario like that …have discussed it with my wife but she not to keen … would luv to meet these two … be interesting to say the least ✨✨

omg, I love Sara, such a caring wife. well told, thanks, a favorite now

Had more potential than delivery. A bit bland for my tastes. A femdom should be more assertive and less concerned with breaking sub hub's limits. That's the appeal for men, we want our women to push our boundaries, not be consulted as to whether ok or not. I guess this was more of a wifey pursuasion than outright control. If that's the case, it succeeded. We'll see if it gets more risqué in ch 2

I was astounded, as I was with a woman in the '80's named Sara who loved to play the same subtle domme game. She was fantastic. Delicious. And an incredibly talented persuader of men. She seduced me and my best friend one weekend and it was like being on acid, the things she had us try and do, from sucking cock to oral/ anal 69, to pegging each other to sucking then fucking each other. Totally ripped any sort of conventional sex to shreds. Shreds. I had had this friend for almost 20 years and the stuff we got into with her, we had never ever even considered doing. Ever. Your writing brought those crazy times all back to me. Thank you.

Really quality work. Love the fact that it is subtle and therefore relatable. Not stereotypical D/s. Beautifully pitched.