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by DaniW

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CliterateDyke almost 8 years ago

This was quite good, especiallyas its your first submission. The chsracters are intetesting and thecsex was really good. Extraordinary in fact. You had me wet with my pussy clenching and I so wished I could have been Patricia. (Actually, I wanted to be Darah too.)

I hope you continue tthis story. I'dlove to see whete you take it. It wwasn'ta brilliant puece of wriring but WTF, for being your first story you get 5 stars from me.

ballznall60 almost 8 years ago

Excellent start!

Looking forward to the "talk tomorrow" continuation. Five stars!

Moddle almost 8 years ago

beautiful, darling

We dream of this.

DaniW almost 8 years agoAuthor

Thanks!

Thanks for the kind words. There is more to the story, hopefully coming soon.

Anonymousover 3 years ago

You write really well but I had to stop at 5'3" and a 7" cock... sorry

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