All Comments on 'Sarah's Stud'

by FiveWolves

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great writing

That was an amazing story, I really liked how you revealed the characters, very clever! Very good dialogue, one of the best stories!

BahamaBahamaover 10 years ago
Damn

That was too hot too not read twice ! I hope there's a part 2

LesbianChickLitLesbianChickLitover 10 years ago

Fucking hot, FiveWolves!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hot

Loved it...want Redemption Part 2 please!

jpb531jpb531over 10 years ago
Fun!

No complaints here if a part two showed up. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
You had me at "What's your name Beautiful"

When I woke up this morning I thought "It's time for some fun." I had a lot of that reading your writing this morning.

Arago007Arago007over 10 years ago
OMG...

Super hot! I love everything you write... Keep it up, you are appreciated :)

BugattiTBugattiTover 10 years ago
Awesome

Waiting 4 chapter 2

LacedUpLacedUpover 10 years ago
Ready for part 2

Hopefully we wont have to wait long for another chapter! :)

curioussandy88curioussandy88over 10 years ago
Great read!

I loved this...just thought to let you know.

*I'm impatiently waiting of the next part*

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 10 years ago
Maybe It's Me

Maybe it's cause I'm a guy, but butch doesn't really do it for me.

Still, well-written, would probably read a follow-up, wouldn't break my heart if there wasn't one.

dizzyliadizzyliaover 10 years ago
Nicely done

I enjoyed the straightforward style of writing. You told the characters' story both efficiently and descriptively, which is not an easy thing. You also left my pulse racing, which is always fun. Five stars! Looking forward to more!

why_not_jillwhy_not_jillover 10 years ago
Great story

I loved the way you write. It almost seems like your are talking to me.

adidasgaladidasgalover 10 years ago
I LOVED IT

OMG!! Two hotties in a story that is HOTTER THAN HELL! Shoo!!!!!!!!! Uhm, .... Where will I find Kori, she is soooooo Hawt! ** grinning ** Seriously FiveWolves, this is fantastic!

You know you set yourself up for a Chapter 02 when Kori left her number on the mirror for Sarah to find, don't you? LoL

FiveWolvesFiveWolvesabout 10 years agoAuthor
Much to my surprise

Much to my surprise, a part two began to take shape. Please be patient - I'm a grad student reaching the crazy end of my studies.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I love it

Im really hoping for a part 2 cause I'm really interested in these character's

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Bravo!

Writing like this should be what Literotica is all about.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uabout 9 years ago

FiveWolves, this made me howl in a lustful way. This is so stud-sexy and I love it. It seems I've traveled this road too and yes, it was fun while it lasted (6 months). I hope these two continue to take a walk on the path less traveled between a stud and a more dominant female. If you take away titles and roles, then what's left is gratification, emotions, and love (?). Speaking of love, I would love to see the story continue.

zoemillerzoemillerover 8 years ago
Precious!

Such a pretty, beautiful story!

As someone who has a lot of trouble finding stories that suit her tastes here, anything involving a stud or butch is pretty rare in the first place, let alone something that resonates with heartfelt sincerity. Two great characters, fully realized in such a short amount of words, both girls I'd like to get to know! I love the subtle, consensual pushing of boundaries. Not everything that involves a little pressure has to be wrapped up in dubious consent, you know? So it's just wonderful to see each character go beyond the bounds of their comfort zones and end up happier (and stickier) for it!

Plus, what's a good story without a good opening line? The anthropology bit, so cute! Sarah came off as an awkward little nerd in those opening lines, and that made the tentative exploration that followed work perfectly for me. <3

FiveWolvesFiveWolvesover 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks y'all!

Thanks for the kind words. Sarah just might have been modeled a little bit on this nerdy anthropologist - maybe.

rml65rml65over 7 years ago
Great story!

Really wish you would write some more! Have enjoyed all your stories on here!

Lian84Lian84almost 7 years ago
Hot story

Hope too read more.

LiamHDunnLiamHDunnover 6 years ago
Enjoyable Read

Very nice story! An enjoyable read,

XactoXactoover 3 years ago
Nice meeting ...

I normally like relationships ... with happy futures. But this was a nice meeting with enough volleying to keep both of them slightly off balance. Very well crafted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love Kori, beautifully drawn (a great turn-on) but didn’t like you much. Great setting but your questions and demands to her rather killed it. I think you’re lucky she stayed. I almost didn’t! I’d love to get close to her especially if she’s into arse-humping....maybe pegging. I love kissing. I don’t eat pussy but I worship bottoms, especially round black ones.....licking and anal. She and I might have one or two meeting points........despite appearances. Loved that she wears her dildo. Micheal (note spelling)

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