All Comments on 'Saturday Night School Ch. 02'

I love this story. It's highly erotic to say the least, and the rating will demonstrate that. There's also not a single grammar or spelling mistake to distract from the story, which on Literotica is a rarity (myself included). Well done, Jessica.

Becca, I won't agree that there are no mistakes at all, but there are darn few- much better than most works on Literotica. This show attention and an ability to develop both story line and characters. Keep it up, JTV

Such a sweet innocence in the characters while at the same time such heat. I enjoyed the first round, and just happened to stumble on Ch. 2. The character development is great, the story arc has surprises, what imagination and then talent to translate that to something your readers can enjoy. Keep wriritng!

. . . can't help but wonder how much it borrows from real life (smile). Your writing is excellent btw.

It so reminds me of my times in high school in much more trying times and the mischief myself and a few lady friends go into. Would love to see another chapter but also understand if it stops here.

Loved the start with the let down. Made me laugh out loud at points. Great job. Keep up the good work. Interesting ending...leaving it unresolved.

Love the build and the premise. Love exhibitionism myself, very hot! My writing incorporates the same type of stuff. Keep writing!

Hey, thanks for both of your Saturday Night School stories. Hot, innocent, curious, experimental, intelligent, daring. I'm keeping an eye on you.

I thought Ch.01 went well, and this chapter has continued just as nicely.

I might be reading more into the author's motivations than she intended, but I have always liked the idea of challenging our insecurities by going to the extreme opposite of what we would do normally. (Although maybe J_t_vh isn't intending it to be an expression of underlying insecurity.)

It could be said that it would be unlikely for a teenage girl like Michelle to be mature enough yet to give it a try in real life, but it's a nice fantasy.

And I'm sure it would be the fantasy of many teenage boys to be in Charlie's situation.

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You really get to the heart of the exhibitionism fetish and why it's so exciting, well done. Also well done on the slow build that relents and let's us have some sexiness just when we're ready for it. Love how this is taking a romantic turn. If there's another chapter, I'd love for her to have an orgasm, which she didn't in this one.

Hope you continue this story soon, it be interesting to see what happens if they got caught together by her friends or one of them atleast. I'm sure what ever you write will be great, I look forward to your future post

One of the very few stories here to capture my attention. Very well done! You're a good writer and should be proud.

The first chapter had me riveted, and this one held me just as strongly. Your ability to voice the character's insecurities, risk taking, and thoughts, without dragging it out, really carries the story. Well done. I look forward to more.

I've never commented on here. There are many stories, but this series ranks at the top.

Thank you

Please tell me there will be more of this excellent story. Better yet, please post the next chapter and I'll be ready to read it.

Thanks for sharing -

RecHiker

This surpasses nearly all other erotica in that it is not only hot material, but the characters are well developed, with honest emotions. Their ambivalences are genuine and mysterious. Jessica, you are a damn good writer.

...AND REALISTIC TOO! Believe me, because when I was younger, I snuck into my local high school over the 4th of July weekend, stripping myself completely naked and hiding my clothes in one of the hall lockers, spending over four hours walking naked through the empty halls, walking up and down the stairs on my bare feet, feeling more alive han I ever felt before that night. I visited most of my old classrooms, pretending one or more of the sexy senior girls sat next to me, or better yet, that a gorgeous female teachers actually stood naked in the front of the room! The next stage of my visit was going down to the auditorium where the school stage is and trying on the costumes in the girls dressing room, pretending I was one of the actresses standing on the stage without any underwear in front of the entire student body while going commando. I finished my nocturnal visit by stepping into the girls gym locker room shower, and stroking my aching erection to a well- deserved orgasm, spewing my hot spern all over the walls of the

girl's showers! That one orgasm is one I will remember for the rest of my life!!! (By the way, there was no soap n the girl's showers on the

4th of July weekend, so I had to load my hands with soap from the girl's restroom in order to lubricate myself, so that was more time spent inside the high school while naked.) ..btw, every word of this true, and it was not the only time I spent nude in my high school. Ask me about the times I spent in the swimming pool without anything on except my class ring!!!

While the production elements were good, the content of the story seems incomplete. The author failed to develop the interplay beyond fucking. The strange communication mystery was mentioned from the earlier odd behavior of Michelle (not acknowledging him at school), but it wasn't addressed at all in this story.

The character, Charlie, is being offered by the author as some sort of victim of Michelle's games. However, the Charlie character is manipulative, selfish, and deceitful. The Charlie character is given no ability or willingness to look out for Michelle's interests or self. He just wants to fuck her; the Charlie character has no interest in the Michelle person, other than to get his own orgasm.

I'm surprised that a woman would write a story with such disregard of respect for the female character.

Very well done and interesting story. I really enjoyed it and it seemed more realistic than many of the stories here on Literotica. I just loved it and plan to read the rest. Please keep up the good work.

Many stories on Literotica contain elements of this bordering on the impossible, but this is what exploring the human condition is about! The testing of waters, use of imagination and then returning to the willful restraint of everyday life! Except in cases where we are able to explore fantasy in real life, such as by visiting a nude beach or traveling several thousand miles to an Adults only vacation resort where fantasies may become reality. As long as the two things are kept apart and the reader/writer appreciates the real risks of "risky behavior" or has the consent of their family to,... run around naked on the farm, through the fields, on the tractor or while working in the barn covered in glistening sweat; waiting for an ice cold tea to be brought out by mom, or dad, or whoever! Much of life happens between fantasies or is grounded in the "hardness" of reality, but fantasies are the unleashed soul, the pleasure-driven beast, and the part inside that keeps us alive and warm most of the time.

So beautifully written, close to heart and soul... and setting every part of the body on fire with its tender erotic...

This story is unbelievably good. As an occasional contributor here on Lit, I'm absurdly jealous of how well written this is. I can't wait for more...

Another fantastic story!

This one just keeps getting better as it goes. The idea of streaking in school, then having sex in school, and kissing the maintenance man while naked--hot hot hot.

Anticipating the rest ! Great work.

Love it!! She cra-cra!

Simply the best.

Don't tell me she hooked up with the guard. I'll be crushed.

I really love this storyline. I cant wait to read more. THANK YOU for sharing it with us!

I read these as you submitted them and again just now. Beautiful writing. They only got better the second time.

Great story. Can’t wait to read more

Hotter still! I think we have all had the nightmare about being naked in a room full of dressed people. Think, now, if it not being a nightmare, but an erotic fantasy. Just WOW! I loved it. The anticipation of being caught and not knowing how it was going to viewed is palpable.

Very well written with a touch of intrigue as to what will happen next. I am loving the pure arousal caused by the sheer nakedness in a public setting!

great adventurer following the first episode, very intensely erotic. They are really lucky to find such complementary partners in this kind of adventure.

Such an incredibly hot story… love your work, Jessica, turns me on. You take this CMNF thing to the next level!