All Comments on 'Saturday Night School Ch. 08'

And it was so nice to have them back.

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Your stories are great and it has been much too long since you posted one.

Thank you.

I am so pleased to see another part in this series, after such a long break. Your story telling has only improved with time, keeping the nervous tension going. Please don't take so long before the next part.

A year and a half, I had thought that I will never meet again Michele and Charlie

Happy you came back... Always a very good story....

Thanks

Glad to see you writing again. I read this story on a pay site - something I almost never do simply because your story was so wonderful that I wanted to thank you even with a pittance commission. Thanks so much

Will you be writing another book? I check Amazon regular to just see if you have authored something new.

I'm very glad you continued this story.

This chapter seems almost melancholy. It is hard to understand what is happening inside Michelle's head. Is she going to freak out? Does she now believe her secret will be revealed? Can Charlie keep her safe? Can she continue to be nude?

Please continue.

You inspired me to write my own. The Murder of Elizabeth Rae. I am very anxious to see you publish another book on Amazon.

So glad its "Saturday Night" featuring Michelle and Charlie. How nice to find you again, we never know when a author lets their story drop. I had to exit the Lit app so I could comment, a problem Lit should fix.

I enjoyed being naked out side with Michelle you ve done a good jobcreating this space for us. To be alone together !

This is a very enjoyable read. Thank you and I hope the story continues.

So happy to see this series continue! Excellent writing, I'm curious where all the threads are headed.

Pls do continue on this nice story....love to read it, one of he best...and plz do give chapters regularly...

I love the scenes and the dialog in this story. It was especially hot when he told her about how he'd want her to get naked and blow him in the park, even in the day and with people around. The way it turned her on even more was super sexy. I also really appreciate the slow reveal of Michelle's motives and emotions. She comes across a 3 dimensional character with complex feelings, and I like the realism that Charlie doesn't always understand or know what to do.

Thanks for sharing this gem.

This is one of my fav stories. Was just trying to read the story again and what a pleasant surprise, an update? Thanks for continuing the story! Thumbs up!

My title says it all. Great easy reading and great story.

Remarkable as always. Five stars from me. Some very minor writing criticism; a couple of spelling mistakes and punctuation errors (admittedly I could do no better). Perhaps a proof - reader or editor would be the solution. Just a thought. Still one of the best. I always enjoy reading your submissions.

This continuation is awesome. This series is seriously one of my very favorite stories on this site. Well done!

Wow, Jessica, I don't know if I'm falling in love with Michelle or you and your imagination..

Still lovin' it....

What can I say that I have not already said about this series...Fantastic to read, and the anticipation of the next chapter...OOOHHH so erotic.

Melissa & Charlie are so good together; & the ones who know about them...discrete, yet enjoy some benefits of knowing what is going on. Ronni is a little Dominatrix herself, which MAY end up being an interesting addition here...again, WE WILL SEE how Jessica handles the story line...

Love It!!!d. **5**Stars⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌋