by TheDarkCloud
Great scenario, but I'd like juicy details. Build it up. Let her tease us, put on a show. Stalk her to the next bar. He already knows her? Make more of that. Show how much she deserves what she gets. Set her up rather than stumble upon her.
Could have been rougher and why in the world didn't you fuck her in the ass?!
I get what you were doing, but would have appreciated a warning.