by frozenhero1
Yes a new chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to read the next and see what happens.
:D
Hard to believe that Graces mother is such a self centered whore that she divorce and knowingly push her husband to commit suicide just to stay a society bitch. Proves not all white trash is poor I guess. Maybe mother should hook up with Dylan instead. Her father not seeing how hateful her mother is being is kinda sick too.
Thank you for coming back to this story, it had started out so very well. I am sorry for your loss and understand the problems you had trying to continue it three years ago. Just give it your best and use this story as a lasting tribute to your departed friend. I know you will prevail.
i understand what kind of scars can be left on the heart after the loss of a friend,good work
THANK YOU for coming back to this story I'm sorry for your loss.
this is an amazing story i love it more sooon please
FrozenHero1, thank you for starting up this story once more. I can't imagine the pain it must bring you to make new works with a character basedinsuch heartbreak. Maybe we as fans can help with that burden with our encouraging words. This has been a story I really wanted to see come to fruition. Don't get me wrong, I loved Beauty and the Geek. However this one felt less of a fantasy and thus to me far more enjoyable. I look forwardto hopefully more chapters. Just remember, you don't owe anyone anything. Though, I appreciate you sharing your friend with us.
I loved your story! This was the first one I've ever read from you. Will there be more to the story frozenhero1? I would really like to read what the future would bring.
Loved the characters and the manner in which you played them. Please keep writing!
You say that you based Grace on a friend of yours. I think that you have excellent taste in friends. I am one of many who face arranged marriage, I am just a little more fortunate that my clan has updated it beliefs. I look forward to seeing how you honor your friend in the journey of your writing.
An admirer
The storyline was interesting and kept my interest but this type of story needs an ending and to me, that lack of an ending destroys the value of the storyline........It would have been much more memorable if the ending had been more final. I would have read it again, but I won't. You got lazy and stopped writing when you should have grabbed the bull by the horns and kicked him in the ass.
Great story. I too have a thing about the southern accent!
I hope there's more, but appreciate this could be it.
You got to finish this story. It has the makings of another " Beauty and the Geek", which I loved three times now.......
..... to this great little story, but fear that there will not be. Five stars for the story as a whole. A great read.
Sucks that you don't write anymore, or at least that you don't post them here. Your writing while a little straight forward and predictable is adorable in its simplicity. While some of the plot points of your stories can be...disagreeable the characters in them always have this fresh sense about them, like youthful optimism.
I hope you find your way back to writing.