All Comments on 'Saving the Company Ch. 03'

by JoeDreamer

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PhlynxPhlynxabout 18 years ago
Great!

What a great story. Please don't leave us hanging for weeks.

Hercules_unleashedHercules_unleashedabout 18 years ago
brilliant

keep it going, this could last forever

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
WOW

A great story! I hope the next chapter is posted soon.

peggytwittypeggytwittyabout 18 years ago
It just keeps getting better and better!

I'm like everyone and waiting with enthusiasm for the next chapter of this love story. Great character development and the dialogue is fantastic. The whole story is fantastic.

Thank you so much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great Story!!!!

Please continue!!! What a story!

BBE

NookiehunterNookiehunterabout 18 years ago
Good Story, But..

For two people as smart as Joe and Bethany, they had a very difficult time resolving coming together in a personal relationship and making that work with their professional relationship. Amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Hot Damn!

That was the shiznit! Now Joe, don't take offense at this, there is a fundamental difference between trauma and drama. Okay?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wonderful descriptive writing!

I'm really enjoying this series Joe. I wouldn't normally comment until I'd finished it but I did want to congratulate you on the line, "You could enjoy my misery a little less obviously." Bloody marvellous! You have given your characters such depth and gravity that it's easy to forgive your small syntax errors and occasional name-changes because the story feels so true to life. Oh yes, the sex is nicely presented as well and I'm enjoying that; but the story itself is why I'm reading on - to my pleased surprise. Five stars.

chytownchytownabout 5 years ago
What A Great Story*****

Thanks for sharing.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanabout 1 year ago

good story plot but too much sex and too little office intrigue for me.

Coochielover71Coochielover714 months ago

Keeps getting better and better.

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