by JoeDreamer
I'm like everyone and waiting with enthusiasm for the next chapter of this love story. Great character development and the dialogue is fantastic. The whole story is fantastic.
Thank you so much.
For two people as smart as Joe and Bethany, they had a very difficult time resolving coming together in a personal relationship and making that work with their professional relationship. Amazing!
That was the shiznit! Now Joe, don't take offense at this, there is a fundamental difference between trauma and drama. Okay?
I'm really enjoying this series Joe. I wouldn't normally comment until I'd finished it but I did want to congratulate you on the line, "You could enjoy my misery a little less obviously." Bloody marvellous! You have given your characters such depth and gravity that it's easy to forgive your small syntax errors and occasional name-changes because the story feels so true to life. Oh yes, the sex is nicely presented as well and I'm enjoying that; but the story itself is why I'm reading on - to my pleased surprise. Five stars.
good story plot but too much sex and too little office intrigue for me.