All Comments on 'Saving You Saving Me'

I thought it was lovely. Nice to read a good lesbian love story once in a while without all the bed hoping that seems to go with it!

This is a fantastic love story, I enjoyed reading it. I hope you will continue to write this type of story.

While there were a few minor punctuation errors, it doesn't matter; truely a superb offering.

Just a quick response to some of the comments I've received.

1. Yes the minor spelling and punctuation mistakes are extremely annoying. Especially since they were not there in the original script. When I up-loaded this story I had to do over three hours of fixes due to a problem with the file transfer. I don't blame the site, probably just some error in the recognition or conversion protocols. Oh, and I do have editors other than spell-check. Two of them in fact.

2. I’ve also received some comments about the “I’m not gay” sections of the story. It’s not about orientation, it’s about the love. That was part of their journey, to get past the preconceived notions of who they could fall in love with. That and I hate labels. We sapiens tend to be polly-amorous. It’s just in our nature. If we cared less about whom we love and more about just loving, I think the world would be a better place. Thank you. I am working a few more ideas and will hopefully post them soon.

Very well written and how did you do with your love story? you nailed it (excuse the pun, or not...) Would it be too much to ask that you be a little less demeaning to your friendly male characters though? that was a little over done, there are some genuinely nice, genuinely strong males in the world who don't feel the need to dominate anyone to be who they are

you write a beautiful story.

Thank goodness, a story a lesbian can love.

Loved it! The best story I have ever read here. Please write more. You took your time with the character development and the relationship building before getting to the juicy parts. It was a lot more realistic than most.

This is one of the best if not the best story Ive read online about love and respect. I love the way you didnt have them just jumping into bed and made their love the focal point of this wonderful story. I have written a few stories in the romance section of nifty so I definately appreciate the depth of your characters. None of my stories are as long and actually were written to my girl as valentines day presents. Not enough of this style or substance online for me and I am very happy to have come across this story. I hope you continue to write and share your stories. Thanks again for sharing this gift!

such an endering story really what i needed to read now, your a fantastic story teller,

Like the rest of the stuff you've written that I've read, it needs an editor to polish it up. Too many flow issues (not Aunty Flo, she was just fine) and various grammatical screw ups. Hey, I don't blame you for the grammar, we all do it. That's what editors are for though.

I really enjoyed it and appreciate you sharing it with the world.

I loved the story! liked it enough to send it to my partner. True the grammar and spelling interupt the flow a bit but it doesn't detract from the story.

Awesome!

I just read this again and enjoyed it just as much this time around...the mark of a true masterpiece. Thank you.

And maybe thank you again.

I've read this story three, maybe four, times now, so a "thank you" for each time.

It is truly a delightful, beautiful love story that I treasure and keep coming back to, as I do with so many of your stories.

As ever, you are a master with the pen, and you know your subject matter - love, lesbian relationships, and police work - so very well. Please keep them coming

Nice story

I honestly love this story. I love some lesbian romance to warm up my day! The characters were very realistic, charismatic and... Well, it was amazing! Thanks for making such a great story ;)

this was so lovely!

Loved it.

This was an absolutely wonderful story! I wish I could give more than 5 stars ... I can even forgive the typos. I love that it actually has a plot rather than having them jump into bed 5 minutes after they meet. Another part that I liked was that they talked about strap-ons but decided NOT to get one. Not all lesbians need that. We are women, after all. :) Nice job!!

Beautiful story

Love it

I LOVE all of Myhands316 story's

I really enjoy reading your work. This is the 3rd or 4th time over 3 years I've read this story and I still keep finding it both excites me and just makes me feel good in side. Thank you I look forward to reading more of your short stories.

Absolutely one of the most beautiful, well written, romantic and sexy stories on this entire website! Smashing! World class!

Amazing story of love! Makes your heart melt at the very end when the characters are talking of their children.

I have read this numerous times and each time gets me emotionally charged up. Thank You for the tears and the rally cries.

I really enjoyed your story. It is most assuredly will be one I will read again. I did get a little lost in a couple places, also hard to follow the dialogue where you put the paragraph spaces, but the sentiment was still there. Also got a little lost in passage of time. Could have used a few more *** that I saw in your story. It was a really wonderful story and I loved it. Though I am surprised they didn't try missionary tribbing. I know not something common among women who are not lesbians, but I thought they would have at least tried it once. I know how well it brings two women together.

That was amazing ! You are awesome ! I just love your stories

Your from TN but either you were taking poetic license or you've never been to Memphis cause there was no way to do any of that stuff from the courthouse or the old greyhound bus station.

Personally, I LIKE the "I'm not gay, I just happen to love a woman" concept. It avoids the "turning gay" motif, which I personally don't believe can happen, or the "repressed gay" motif, which I suppose COULD happen, but still not my favorite, especially not true if character not attracted to other women.

Minor quibble - How did she not recognize her aunt in the restaurant? I know it was Cheryll who came over, but they could see Flo at the other table.

And I'm sorry, you can't blame the upload for confusing "patience" with "patients", and you "shutter" windows, people "shudder".

You had me when you mentioned a classic Mustang!!!! This was excellent! The build up wasn't rushed and very believable. The chemistry was very real. I just loved this

There was a time or two, i wanted to cry, but in the end I loved the story so much. Thank you for sharing with all of us. I do want to read more of your stories.

Love has no respect of gender, age, nationality, religion, or social economic class, it just is.

Great storyline...others have stated the obvious things...I like the build up of hard hearts softened,and melted into each other.Traditions and other peoples' issues come into play too many times in peoples lives and they never find the love they were truly looking for.Nicely done.

I loved the story so much. Thank you for sharing with all of us. I do want to read more of your stories

A very enjoyable romantic thriller which I'll probably read again sometime in the future. Five stars given freely and I'll certainly be reading some of your other stories. I loved the line about "Stop thinking about what's not and think about what is." A good philosophy. Now at the risk of being a boring old fart, I must add that throughout, the story was marred for me by some really poor punctuation and a fairly large number of silly spelling mistakes (example: "...she drank cheep wine..." 'Cheep' is what birds do; 'cheap' is probably what the wine was). I'm only mentioning this because somebody who can write such a good story with decent plot and slow build-up should be aware of the importance of good spelling and grammar.

I must of read this story more then a fair few times now. Each time I thoroughly enjoy it and fall in love with the characters over and over again. It's bloody brilliant, enchanting and romantic. Love over coming obstacles whether personal, family or life.

Keep up the excellent work.

Every one of your submissions is riddled with errors and every one has feedback commenting on this fact. Many have recommended you get an editor. You either do not care, do not read these comments, are too embarrassed to ask for help or think it is all a big joke.

That was the nun's tattoo from Canterbury Tales. I don't remember everything I studied in English Literature, but that phrase still helps my perspective on life. This story is a great sermon on that subject.

I have read this a few times

i love the story

ignore the idiots with the bad comments ...

I totally enjoyed this story, great job. For some reason, while reading it, I pictured the two protagonists as Rizzoli and Isles ;)

btw the glock does not have a safety, it has a double trigger instead so there is no was to put it safe while it is loaded with a round in the chamber

This is the third or fourth time I've read this story, and it is still outstanding! thank you so very much for sharing it with us!

A lot of fun to read and lots of action too! Thank you!

That story was absolutely beautiful I loved reading it

How did the bad guys know who they are, and why would the 3 different police teams not work together? Snatching girls from right in front of the bus at the station screams too stupid to be real.

REDLION, if you knew anything about the various departments of law enforcement anywhere in the world, you would know that the various elements have an almost "gang culture", and yes everyone on the outside knows how stupid and counter productive it is.

How many MAJOR criminals have escaped capture because of this? We will never know, just the same as we will never know A) why this is allowed and B) how many lives, both innocent and law enforcement have been lost through incompetence.

As for the story itself, as expected it was entertaining, thought provoking, erotic and every other adjective associated with other works by this particular author.

Once again, thanks for taking the time to write for us.

The few spelling mistakes in no way detracted from my enjoyment of your story, so please try to ignore the nit pickers :)

When the story has a glaring fault it is difficult to keep reading, the problem is; Glock pistols do not have a safety,

Well first off, you are wrong! Glocks have 3 safeties, firing pin, trigger and drop saftety... Now about this story loved it as always, I hope you continue with your writing....

The passive safety of the glock can not be "set" but it is still a safety. Honestly replace the glocks with M9's and it's still the same story with the added benefit of being able to use the "Are you happy to see me or is that a bazooka in your pants" line.

You did a really good job of telling a romantic love story that is exciting to read and keep the readers attention. The relationship was build 'properly' if that makes sense and they took their time falling in Love. Thanks for your effort.

Sweet and adorable, I loved it.

The heart wants what it wants.

Nuff said…

Good Story!

Thank you!

Very enjoyable read and quite exciting.

I really enjoyed reading this story again.

There are the bones of a really good story here. But, it's tragically compromised by spelling, grammar and sentence structure issues. An editor is desperately needed.