All Comments on 'Say My Name'

Oh I LOVED it! A sequel would be so awesome but the stand alone works as well! I would love to see his history, like how he got into the predicament he was in and how he found Tasha. Is she going to give him and nickname? Because that one isn't going to work in public. Lol. Great job as usual

I LOVED this! I don't know how you came up with this idea, but the originality of it was INSANE! And her giving him a child really WOULD have been awesome. This is still a great adaptation of one of my most favorite fairy tales, though. Very cool!

I totally enjoyed this story. Pacing and plot on point! I love the chemistry between them and the way you adapted this from the classic fairy tale.

Not sure how resetting her business is going to help her out. What is having an investor going to do when there is still no demand for her services? You should have included some line about moving to a bigger city or turning it into a mobile business; something that she was going to change to account for a total lack of customers. With the way it is written the only thing that will change is that she loses a bunch of her investor's money in addition to her own and it just takes her a little longer to go out of business.

I also found her near total disinterest in who/what he is hard to believe. She doesn't even seem curious to know the answers to questions like: Why was he cursed? Who cursed him? If it was meant to be a curse, why can he grant wishes? Hell, she doesn't even seem interested in the man himself. Where is he from? How old is he? Why does the idea of having a child make him so happy? She should have wanted to know the answers to those questions, but I also wanted them. Instead, she goes from freaked out to not caring in like five minutes and the reader doesn't get to learn anything about him as a result.

Overall, I wasn't wild about the story. There was a good core concept; it was a nice change from the kind of stories I read in which a male would normally be the one coming across a female mythological creature. But the execution left something to be desired. It's just kind of...flimsy. There is some backstory and the characters aren't completely hollow, but it still feels far from a fully fleshed out story.

I just read this for the second time and it's still a cool story. Jinx is so hot. I would LOVE for a man to seduce me like that. GEEZ!!! I would also love a second part of this with them having a child and her newly successful business.

Maybe with investors, she could afford more advertising and an active web site. She could possibly afford to sponsor dog shows, bringing her more business from that demographic. Some people miss the point of the story, wanting too much out of it. They take all the fun out of reading or even writing erotic fantasy fiction. Thank you for a new, original idea!