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by clownprince2008

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great build-up.

Your build-up was so good, that it overshadowed the payoff scene. The payoff scene was also a little short, but it fit the story, so I can't really complain about it that much.

Hope you do more. Natalie is lovely.

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