All Comments on 'Schism Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
So excited!

Can’t wait for part 2!

pwnsumnubspwnsumnubsover 6 years ago

Wow, very well done!

notusuallyshynotusuallyshyover 6 years ago
Arousing

I love noncon and reluctant arousal themes, and it here it is presented in quite a unique fashion. I wonder how you're going to play this out. Has the Alter personality appeared because of severe repression? Will Dane come to realise he loves cock and poof Edan will disappear?

I enjoyed it but the , I loved the sex but the Mental health side has me thinking

JasonClearwaterJasonClearwaterover 6 years agoAuthor
Hey, notusuallyshy

Good to see you again. :-) You always seem to get where I'm going with something.Part II's been submitted, and part III's in the works and hopefully will live up to expectations. :-)

WritingInAThong2020WritingInAThong2020almost 4 years ago
Nicely done

Refreshing to read some good writing on here. You’ve got the knack. I’m very eager to hear how Dane likes having his sexy little ass ruined.

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Update: April 2021 I haven't been active on Lit in years, and won't be for the foreseeable future, but I felt like an update was in order, to let everyone know I'm still alive. . About me: I'm gay, and more interested in D/s than ass-plundering, which is why I don't waste ...

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