All Comments on 'Schoolgirl Uniform; Danielle Ch. 01'

But far too much use of the word "naughty".

But the word ELECTRICITY was overused, and when you went from using breast to tit I was disappointed, because it lowered the theme of the conquest.

The author needs to repeat grade school level grammar to learn that "word...word" isn't proper nor valid, just meaningless junk. Get an editor.

Many guys are tempted by daughter's friends. Often they peep and jo. In right circumstances more happens. Some girls really enjoy a more mature man.

Good fun, readable. It might surprise some reviewers that schoolgirls being fucked don't speak in grammatically correct sentences, and the author portrayed her well. To be fair to them though, they wouldn't know that if their sexual experiences have been limited to masturbation.

One of the hottest and most descriptive stories I have read on this site.

Really nicely done :) hope to read more!

Incredibly hot! Great twist. Loved it!

Very nice story. Every time she says "Mr Grant", I hear it in my head as Mary Tyler Moore talking to Ed Asner in her TV show ( The Mary Tyler Moore Show). Am I the only one who "hears" that?????

The typographical errors were one thing, but the constant repitition of the phrase "oh, god!" rendered this story absolutely ridiculous. The storyline had promise, as it has a million times before on this site; however the writer lacked the creativity in regard to choice of prose, to maintain my interest.

Lost count of the number of times electricity was used in the story

Hot ~ sooo HOT! Well written, exciting, erotic story!! Thank you :)

I tried to give your story a 5 but it would only allow a 1. Sorry about that. Love,love,love this story! Please have it continue, I have read it over and over. I really enjoy all of your stories, definitely one of my favorite authors.

I didn't go beyond the first Page because you failed to use the proper tense of a word you had already used.

You can't make obvious mistakes like that!