All Comments on 'Scot's Conquest at the Gym'

I like you way you interspersed the historical commentary with the current action. Very well done!

Hang on a minute, I think I know this girl. She's married to a Scottish pal of mine. Trouble is, he can't keep her satisfied, and I understand that's a common problem up there. Not too bad a story though.

Think you will find its the English who have fucked the Scots for centuries now.....

Did she not get just what she wanted every time they met, perhaps she seduced the energetic good looking man, instead of him seducing her. Those sweet English little tarts can be very covert when they need to be.

He can have all of the fantasies he wants, but it was plain to see, she had him wrapped around her finger.

Thanks for the good read

Did she notice you taking notes and statistics during your meetings?

"England-shire?" Are you inventing new countries or did you just omit a County?

Anything you take from gutless yella belly Brits is a bonus, especially by Scottish man. (there is no such thing as a man in britain)

This is the same story as Stranger at the Gym written by romantichica, just retold from the male point of view. It's a good story, but you should give credit when you reuse someone else's idea.