All Comments on 'Screwed by Wall Street Pt. 02'

Way too confusing and disjointed.

I agree with wonder203, to many good stories seem to start going off the rails so to speak by introducing too many characters and you start to lose track of who is who.

I hope this story doesn't continue down this track as I'm enjoying it.

I like the tangled nature of your stories. Your style is distinctive. Keep up the good work.

Once upon a time, Sierra spent a few days in Manhattan attending a seminar. The impact was overwhelming! The richest Capitalists, the best musicians, the most generous Foundations, the nastiest crooks, the incredible subways. Thrown to the wolves, how will Joan and friends survive to make their mark for the good guys (and girls)?!

Stay tuned.

- s

Certainly is confusing at times but that's typical of Lit stories if you read the instalments as they are published. I like this but concerned for Joan as she gets carried away, she needs to find hef own stud.