by WFEATHER
Waiting with baited breath for Chapter 2. The slow build up and what will happen when they move to the hotel is exciting.
very hot. I wish you could write faster. I loved the makeout/sex? scene between the two characters. very descriptive, you made me feel like I was there in the room with them. I can't wait for chapter two.
I believe this is the first time that I have commented here on a comment to one of my stories or poems, but I felt I should inform everyone that the entirety of the story (three chapters) has already been submitted to Literotica. There is a rule in place that only one chapter is posted per day, so Chapter 2 should be posted Monday, and Chapter 3 posted Tuesday.
This is the best of the submissions I've read so far. It is well written and you've taken your time to build the relationship's progress. Excellent, I look forward to the rest. :)
This is the best story on Lit describing the brain's role in sex. The protagonist is so well written.