All Comments on 'Second Chance'

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Pulsifer42Pulsifer42over 10 years ago

Fun. Got my attention and held it on course throughout the entire story..

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Sweet. Well written. Erotic. "Gripping" And just the right length for a coffee break

J_Dollar_BiJ_Dollar_Bialmost 7 years ago
This story just flows

There is an amazing flow to the story. The instant I started reading it, I knew it was going to be quick and I had to fasten my seat belt.

A true artist at work (or pleasure)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Rocky start.

Gathered pace. Unfolded. Revealed. Closed nicely.

Thanks Don

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