All Comments on 'Second Window'

There will be a lot of comments demanding part 2 - please, don't listen! It is perfect as it is right now! Just enough not explained parts get your own imagination going without getting lost.

Alex

Second reading of this story published elsewhere. I agree with an earlier comment. It’s perfect just the way it is. In such a short piece you wring out an amazing amount of emotions.

Liked it. Good writing, horny fuck. Good dialogue. Will look out for more of your stuff.

Fucking nice piece of writing. Also, relatable content.

WOW, fucking WOW! This story is amazing...sensual, earthy, and real. My new favorite author.