by Momstheboss
Enjoyed reading the story and looking forward to more chapters. Thanks for your time and efforts.
... but not bad. However, when did Port Hardy get moved to Victoria Island from Vancouver Island? And where exactly is Victoria Island?
Your writing has improved some. I read an earlier work by you and it was pretty bad.......mother, daughter, brother, son story. A Teachable Moment..... was the title I think.