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yukonnightsyukonnightsover 5 years agoAuthor
Apologies

Dear Readers, If you've read this far I want to both thank you and apologize for the many typos in this piece. I assure you it is not my normal practice and I am editing the entire mess and hope to have all corrected soon. To be frank, my haste in trying to meet the deadline led to poor proofreading on my part. For those who still saw the love and beauty of the story, I thank you and invite you to come back after awhile and hopefully find an easier read. ~ yukonnights

tim23832tim23832over 5 years ago

Thanks for your story. Expectations exceeded! Please write more.

Reader777Reader777over 5 years ago

I think this is an excellent story and I enjoyed it very much. You portrayed a lot of emotions in the characters and I feel like I know these men. I would love to be friends with them, I feel like they’re alive and real. Great job writing. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Such a wonderful story

We are so fortunate in this day to be able to have the ability to travel with ease and not let distance and common mores rule our destinies. We have mail, phones, and cars. This was such a great story. I loved it. The life the old settlers of so many years ago had to lead was so difficult and heart breaking. So glad to be living today. Thank you for reminding us of how good we really have life and love today. Fewer tears. Look forward to more. Thank you again.

KeithDKeithDabout 5 years ago
Epic

An epic, believable tale of early settlement of the West. Well written; an excellent gay romance.

gordo12gordo12about 5 years ago
Keith Described It Well

A very well written Western romance.

Your command of the language in creating word pictures is fantastic.

5*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Cute

Gurrrllll I was bout Fught Josie over that dog!!!!!!!! Baaaabbbby!!!!! But this was cute asf

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Beautiful 💖. That was so well written and real.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman4 days ago

very good, well written. guess I'm crude as I was hoping for more defined sex. LOL. I have heard of gold rush miners with a "camp wife" where no females existed.

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a true romantic who believes; that love is more powerful than hate...that kindness is stronger than cruelty...that sex fueled by true love is better than sex fueled by lust alone...that there is good in all people, it's just hard sometimes to find... edit 12-2013) It's been...

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