by xyster
So extremely good this story is.
I wish I had it in a paperback edition, reading it on a bus, an
aeroplane, or on a train station while waiting for somebody to arrive. I wish
I could find it hardcover in a library.
Convinced Greetings from someplace a couple of decades too early I
guess!
A clever way of getting the reader to follow the storyline with a touch of sexual excitement. The writer has no hurry to finish off the story,like some others, but is able to sustain the flow to the mystery of "who is reading the book as well". I suspect it could be a twist that it was her mother instead, but not. Very good story and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.
Subtle, smooth, leading but sublime. Absolutely delicious. I now expect no less from you Xyster.
it was great to read the way the story was narrated. i woul hav eloved to be having the same intentions
Why have you stopped writing? It's been several years since I've seen anything new from you...
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Please come back!!
That was an excellent way to cross the taboo.
I have now read more of your stories. You have a very enjoyable style.
I will read all of your work. I had a good laugh over the jokes in "Horsing around".
I'm am chuckling just thinking about reading more.
Love your writing, looking forward to more.
I know I am late as I only just found you.
Heartiest congratulations.
U are an awesome fucker dude! I have been waiting to be fucked like this!!!! Sweet ecstasy! Nice keep going! The pose u like is my fav too. I am a girl. Angelique
I love this story and the way it's written made me feel if I was there watching
First Off-you are a lady, not a "dude" as so many of the readers have referred to you. And, I so much appreciate that you are able to write so dramatically and emotionally. You bring your readers right into the story with you!!
I am on the the 3rd story of yours; after looking at your "Biography", seeing you are female..."Oh, Momma!!"