All Comments on 'Secret Prayer Ch. 01'

Liking the start of this

Beautiful beginning. I look forward to seeing how this develops!

You and Wanderer work extremely well together, this is a great start to what appears is going to be a very hot thought-provoking story. Well done!

Nice start to young people trying to sort out how to fit a square block thru and a round hole. Honestly all religions have some complicated things and compromises that followers have to sort out. But the legalistic ones are the hardest ones. Jerek is a great character and Gage and Tate are lucky to have been honest with each other early in their rotation about their “temptations “ that both missionaries might have a chance to experience life before their missions are done.