by Joe Average
nice story line,,, it seems that you are headed somewhere fast and once you get there you are not sure just what to do with your story. Give your story a change of pace and some realsitic interactions between the characters.
So glad you're writing and posting on Lit again--you know how much I love your big-tit stories! Really enjoyed this one. Like your others, it's just plain fun reading. Hope you'll keep your stories coming.