All Comments on 'Secret Santa'

by Joe Average

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CWCWover 20 years ago
still needs some work

nice story line,,, it seems that you are headed somewhere fast and once you get there you are not sure just what to do with your story. Give your story a change of pace and some realsitic interactions between the characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Bravo

Good work from a 38DDD!!

JC MackJC Mackover 20 years ago
Welcome back, Joe!

So glad you're writing and posting on Lit again--you know how much I love your big-tit stories! Really enjoyed this one. Like your others, it's just plain fun reading. Hope you'll keep your stories coming.

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