All Comments on 'Secret Santa'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More please!

I rather enjoyed this! Please continue the series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
re-posted?

Read this here before, was it you? Not bad, not great, an original story would have been nice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Repost / Stolen ??

Again, this is an exact duplicate of the original story. Not even the names are changed. I gave the original 3 stars but this one only one as zero is not available.

PolyLvrPolyLvrover 9 years ago
not bad

I have no problem with the incest angle. What I do have a problem with, and I found difficult to reconcile in the story, is that the wife never tried to explain what was going to happen, to her husband. No matter what, allowing her brother to take her while her standing with her husband was uncertain didn't seem like the actions of a loving wife. I would have enjoyed it more if there was more realism leading up to Davey's acceptance and inclusion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
One side story

Only one side story. She get whole thing. That sucks. 1 star. Bullshits.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
What?

I waited the whole story just knowing that David was going to get to have his way with Stephanie and NOTHING. Come on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
nothing about him fucking Stephanie, well not as far as I made anyway

Thought he was supposed to fuck Steph as her secret santa,, ohhhh noooooo,,, lets suck the brother in laws fucking dick instead you fucking fag,, really wish there was minus votes for trash like this

2 thumbs down and a big whopping ace

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Junk

Crap story - can it be less than 1?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Stupid Story

On sooooo many levels.

What a waste of time.

Ducky7Ducky7over 9 years ago
Of course Matt had

to have a 12 foot dick.

xxeloxxeloover 9 years ago
Nice

forget about all the negative's here!

I loved your story!!

But some secret santas didn't have there family time yet so….

This screams for part two !!

XXL

sluttyblakgurl87sluttyblakgurl87over 9 years ago
Such Negativity...

This isn't even my type of tea but I thought it was well written. Sure everyone is entitled to their own opinions but when it's just rude and mean, maybe keep those thoughts to yourself. Keep up the good work!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing

One of my favorite stories, I have read on this site!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

should continue how steph and David did it and what david's secret santa gave him

GriffyD_BoyGriffyD_Boyabout 9 years ago

I liked it, but the ending wasn't very good. It seemed like it ended mid story instead of reaching an actual conclusion.

rixelsrixelsover 8 years ago
Some Farmers

Smart farmers do not inbreed their stock. David was chosen because he could be led and dominated. He didn't demand an explanation. It was not just a family playing together. It was a family denying David of a bloodline.

rixelsrixelsover 8 years ago
Sick Drama

Instead of this being a story about a family that plays together it is just another cuck psucko-drama.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

We know these are all fake but a little reason and conceivably would make this kind of story worth reading. The people that write this must not live in the real world or ever get laid. Why would his wife not explain it before just throwing him in that ...among many othe stupid things here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

utter rubbish

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