All Comments on 'Secrets and Confessions'

by BrettJ

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Great story. Interesting setup but it surely calls for another chapter, where Sherry and Adam have some private time to talk and play and whatever else they wish to do. Very different kind of pairing but is really really great !! Than k you. Cannot wait for more.

goldponygoldponyabout 8 years ago
hmmmmmm

A well structured story. Really like the build up. Now the question is.....will CJ ever leave Adam alone. Not that he would mind that.....but they hit a vibe, and should run with it. There is several more chapters to this story Tell us more, nuch more. GP

TossawayTossawayabout 8 years ago
Definitely Smokin'

BrettJ, you have delivered another hot coal to the fire! I agree with the other two, this one definitely deserves at least 1, but maybe 2 more chapters. I hope you have the time to keep your readers happiest!! 5*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Secrets and concessions

Good read but felt a little rushed at the end. Would like to read more from this series. It has definite potential for more stories.

LegallySaneLegallySanealmost 4 years ago
Great...

until it turned into a 4some. A 2 at best.

linnearlinnearabout 3 years ago
That Was Hot

What a very hot story, I wish there was more to it but Damn it was good.

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