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Some thoughts on the story are available here, assuming the link doesn't break.

https://xarthwritesthings.wordpress.com/2019/06/29/secrets-and-surrender/

Thanks for reading and hopefully enjoying

-X

Now this how I love reading fantabulous story. Long erotic sexy!!!!!!!!!💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋. Perfect thank you.

I look forward to seeing the next step in their journey.

Not gonna lie this was an amazing story!!! The dialogue and complex feelings and emotions were so on point and the sex scenes were on another level... Best story ever on here a matter of fact I've never commented before.👏👏👏

These aren't often what I like but this was just a great story of young love. Really enjoyed it.

Great story with very real feeling dialogue and interactions both sexual and emotional. Totally enjoyed it

I was kind of sorry that in the sex, you didn't talk more about Kylie's breasts. You vaguely indicated she had them and that Carter played with them, but no description.

Being something of a traditionalist, I'd prefer if Kylie continued her transition including bottom surgery, but that's my hangup.

Nice romance.

I really loved the honesty and witty exchanges between them. One of the best stories I've read. Eagerly waiting for the next part 😀

This has got to be the most thoughtout and beautifully written story I have ever read in literotica. The was the diolog is presented it is almost a fluid reading of a screenplay. The buildup of the caractors and the scene s painted are outstanding. Would love to see a sequal to this and find out were Kylie and Carter end up at the end of summer.

One of your best and I really enjoy when you dip into trans stories

I loved this story, especially that Kylie became confident enough to let him touch her!

I loved this story; it was real in a way few erotic stories ever get written. I know, as the author, you have either experienced or at least dreamed of this kind of relationship. How else could you have written such a poignant story. Now this is a piece of literature that could make a very good movie, but alas I'm not sure the erotic movie industry is smart enough to capitalize on that idea. I would give anything to have had such a love in my life. Bravo!!! and Encore!!!! Please be prolific.

I love your take on this genre. Enjoyable read start to finish as always! Futa House is still my favorite story of all time, but this comes in a close second! Hope to see more from this genre in the future!!

Not exactly of my taste but I am writing to you as compliment

Excellent story - nice build up as well. Two thumbs up.

The dialogue was simply amazing. Made it feel real and organic.

The sex wasn't my cup of tea, but the story and writing us top notch - not that it surprises anyone who has read anything of yours before. Bravo!

The very best dialogue I've ever read. Some have come close, but this is the most realistic dialogue between characters. Love how the characters feel real, and as a transgender woman myself, I identify so much with Kylie's fears and struggles.

I've read so many stories where transwomen having a penis is treated as an obstacle to be overcome, or simply fetishized, but this story makes it feel like just part of life. Carter's acceptance and care for her is beautiful.

I also see many authors put in conflict seemingly to tick a box on "what a story should contain" rather than it feeling naturally a part of events, but you haven't done that here and I very much appreciate it. In addition, the only major conflict in the story (Ben's dick kick) happens "offscreen" and is referenced, rather than trying to go through it in details, and this pacing and view of reactions instead of the event itself feels so much better than it could've been.

My hats off to you, as this is an amazing story. The best work I’ve seen on this site, period. The conversations are purely realistic, and made this an ecstatic read. Keep up the splendid work

I have to say I really enjoyed this story from start to finish. The build up, setting, and writing were all superb. My only real complaint is some aspect is some things that were slimmer over such as stuff with his friends given their last reaction leaves kylie somewhat freaked out. Also I would've liked some more on what his parents think, it looked like his dad was alright but you left it kinda implying some issue with his mother and then there's the thing with her parents. I love this story and most of your other ones but I guess I really want to see more of the world around these two. I know that's usually not your thing and it isnt the focus of the story but I cant help but feel a yearning for more whenever a story of yours ends. Overall though this really was a down to earth sweet tale that I see myself coming back to, but still I see potential in a follow up.

I've been following your writing since "dreams don't count" and every story you really get me to care for the characters. But this was the first time I truly connected with them I loved every bit of plot just as much if not more than the sexy stuff. You truly are a brilliant writer.

This is surprisingly accurate in the representation of the struggles they go through. My fianceé is a trans lady and is exactly the same as Kylie down to a T. She adores nothing more than being treated like a woman, and when in bed, like a slut. (the old adage, "A lady in the streets and a freak in the sheets" comes to mind). Though I will say I've only ever known her post operation (so she's transitioned from male to female). She lacks a penis and instead has a pretty damn close resemblance to a pussy there instead. Honestly? It's hard to tell the difference when you're inside. It's mostly cosmetically different. And if you love someone enough you look past that.

Loved reading it.

when i first opened the story I was a bit intimidated by the length, but I have to say I ended up enjoying every page of it. probably the most realistic story I've ever read on this site. thank you for sharing. I would like to see a sequel, but if not I hope you do choose to write more stories in this category because this was phenomenal.

This was so cute!! So cute! Obviously also very sexy, I mean you wrote all of that wonderfully but I'm so in love with these two. Their relationship is so lovely? This is one of the few rare times that I clicked for the porn but now actually want to read this as an extended story, sex or no sex. It's so lovely! The way they interact is so true and likeable. I loved it!!! Loved it! I think this is my first time ever commenting on a Literotica story, that's how enamoured with this I am. I love it, thank you!

That was utterly delightful, thoughtful, and sexy. Keep writing, you wonderful, wonderful person.

Best story I've read so far, really well balanced and loved its a longer story, some sequels would be great too

I loved this story. How real it is. It just resonated with me. Thank you.

This ending makes me wish you wrote a second part.. the relationship they had at the end was amazing.. you made carters character perfectly.. with Kylie being transgendered and he still kept his feelings for her strong and he didn’t back off.. that right there is fucking love.. loved the story.. every letter.. every word.. so wish there was a second part..

A lonely boy meets a lonely girl story with an interesting twist, that she used to be a he, and the whole school remembers. They meet, they deal, they fall in lust and then love, So, wow it was well told, interesting, and should be made into an X-rated after school special ( the LGBTQ's would love it! ). Very well done, thank you!

I love all your stuff Xarth but this …. you really hit the ball out of the park this time. It reminded me a lot of me and.... someone I'm intimate with, except the situations are kind of reversed, I'm a gay woman and she's a transwomen but the attraction was such that it overrode the other considerations. I really hope I can write half as good as you one day, I'm still polishing my skills, maybe I'll submit something someday.

great writing, well told and it has a very powerful message. and of course i loved it also. you kept the story at a great pace, and on track throughout. well done just isn't enough of a compliment.

Damn good story. I choose to think it was a true story and thank you for sharing it with us thanks Tom/Tami

Great pace with a good amount of dirtiness. Please continue!

A very loving, romantic and erotic story. A very enjoyable read. I will definitely be reading more of your stories. Keep up the good work.

I would watch a feature film of this (with less sex, for ratings reasons). This is a compelling little love story. I keep coming back here because I find myself thinking about how real it feels, and it's stuck with me since the moment I read it. The ending makes me feel like it's all going to be okay, like there is someone out there for everyone.

Well done.

I would love to think that this storey and it's happy ending reflects humanity's attitudes to the complications raised by gender change, but it doesn't and we all need to examine our inner prejudices in determining what is normal.

Really a good read. Interesting erotic storyline and great gramatics. One of the few "polished" stories I've read. Well done.

Good storyline, well written.

would love to read this story from kylie viewpoint also.

I hopped on literotica looking for porn, and found a thought provoking, eye opening tale about self discovery instead. Which was also porn, which was nice.

I've been reading Literotica for a while. This is the best stories I've come across. Too bad that it's already rated so highly as my rating doesn't do much to improve it.

a lot of what i wanted/needed to say has already bean said .so as a trans woman myself -thank you so much for this beautifully told story . please continue to write more like this . it means so much to be accepted for who you are and loved deeply .

First and foremost, this is an amazing well written story. Remove the sexand I'd still appreciate it. However the sex makes it that much better from a literary point of view; it's highly erotic and not pornographic. I'm torn between the story continuing and just letting the couple grow in my imagination. Thanks for the pleasure of reading this.

I regret waiting to read this, as it is truly one of your best. Believable characters, even the minor players, and some of the best dialog I have read anywhere. The dialog and the interaction between Kylie and Carter are what made this story such a joy to read. The sex scenes were pretty damn hot, too. This is definitely going into my favorites file.

Amazing story to go with the amazing writing and amazing character development. Did I mention I thought it was amazing? It's freaking AMAZING! My only regret is I can only give it 5 stars.

Not usually into the male on trans stuff but the relationship was just so goddamn cute that I enjoyed myself.

i have to commend you not only on writing so well, as you do with all your stories, but in so marvelously capturing Kylie’s voice. She sounds so much like trans girls i’ve known that it made the story more immersive than most i’ve read. Her struggles with dysphoria and her need to adopt such a submissive persona sexually to feel feminine, contrasting so strongly with her brusque, sarcastic mannerisms felt extremely three-dimensional. And i wanted to pleasure Kylie as much as the narrator! Such a great story; it’s going into my favorites.

This story is wonderful! It was beautiful to see how one persons love could unlock the happiness of another. I could feel the two falling in love. Bravo for writing a story that shows how beautiful a transgender woman can be.

Loved the story! Amazing writing. The story really made me feel quite immersed. The only constructive critique I'll leave just in case you read the commentaries I only wished that you better described the main characters looks so we could of better pictured better what was all and all I fucking amazing erotic story probably the best I've ever read.

Wonderful story, thank you, loved the dialogues.

Boring

Loved the storyline and the 2 main characters. Could easily see a sequel 5 years or so in the future. Discussion around whether or not Kylie should have bottom surgery. Does Kylie need it to feel fully validated? How does Carter feel about it? What about kids? They would probably be great parents. Do they adopt or find a surrogate?

This was extremely well written, and whereas most erotic stories or prose I have ever read was a thing of visceral, sex focused, and ultimately droll plotless porn, this story stands on its own as one that actually sucked me (no pun intended) into the romance. It made me feel, and care about the couple. Took me a little longer to climax reading lol, but it was well worth it for how engrossing and positively provocative this was. Well done.

Christ. That was amazing

You are the best writer, I am invested in the characters. Quite surprising for an erotic story. I would read anything just to follow this wonderful couple!

It was an exceptionally well-written story but the big problem is that Carter thinks too much like an older, wiser, and experienced man. Maybe like my dad in his mid 40s. Too many things with your first sexual experiences are awkward and messy and did I say awkward? Carter seems to have most of everything figured out. While that might be cool for some, the reality and awkwardness (there I go again) just isnt there and it again feels more like a 40 year old roleplaying a high school kid.

I looked at this as a quick release, shame on me. Kept clicking next page and forgot about my ... well.. This is "WRITING"

I loved the story. Great lines with much content. Not slam bam screw you maam!!!!! I couldn't stop until I had read the whole story. I really loved it. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your stuff!!!!! Again great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful Story!!!!!!!

That was an absolutely beautiful story, brilliantly written and pitched at just the right place. Without a doubt, one of the best I have ever read. Thank you, and thanks for taking the time.

A coming of age story brilliantly written looking at both sides of the relationship. I think you are there and I look to read more of your stories in the future. Keep up the good work and your editor did some marvelous editing!

This is simply beatiful

literally crying

I absolutely love this. I hope you are working on or had planned to work on a chapter 2. A whole summer of sexy times sounds amazing. I'm curious to find out if Kylie is interested in giving anal and if Carter is interested in receiving it.

Such a great story! I love everything about your writing. Hope you write a sequel so we can read more!

after reading at least a thousand stories on this site I can honestly say this is the first story I’ve read in which I actually cared about the characters. Great story.

This one of the all time best!!

A great love story

Best story of 2019

Worth *****

Great job with the character and plot build up. For a story that’s 8 pages long it was well written enough that all 8 were needed.

Great story.

thanks

Loved the story the characters were so in depth. Wish you had more like it

That was positively adorable. More please.

My main problem with so many erotic stories is that the actual conversations between characters tend to be exposition, cliché and monologue, falling well short of what real people say and how we talk in real life... Not this one! All of your characters feel real and well-rounded, and it makes the story so much better!

This story is outstanding, both in the quality of the writing and in the sensitive way a complex subject is handled. This feels real, and is so much the better for it. Bravo!

Thank you for sharing your talent with us. You have a gift of the ability for story development. I enjoyed reading about how the couple's relationship progressed. You could easily publish a kindle ebook. I hope you do.

This is so nice, I'm really wishing you ahd more trans stories on here.

One of the absolute best stories I've read. Fantastic work!

Excellent story, I connect with Kylie so much......

Your stories are amongst the best on this site Xarth, but I think this one tops all the others. It is so evocative that I imagined I was the one doing the loving and the sexy stuff with Kylie. If only...

Such a great story!!!! Nothing like young love and even more So when it's a first love!!! Thanks for all your work on this story....

At the time of writing this was (and hopefully still is) the highest rated transgender story on the site and you definitely earned it.

That out of the way, and I don't know if I mean this as criticism or a compliment, your stories always seem to end right when I feel like they are about to truly begin. I've read all of them and once a relationship reaches somewhere stable you seem content to end the story, which is probably a good thing, this is an erotica site after all.

In every story you write it feels like you end when there is nowhere to go in terms of having them do a new sexual act that would still be in character. Some stories others write go on so long that what the characters are doing reach unreasonable extremes. Handcuff Sister, while still one of my favorites, is the closest you've come to that issue and even then I wasn't ready for it to end. I suppose it is good that you always know exactly when to stop. No risk of the reader feeling like things drug on.

In this case though... I think decisions and situations that come up after, presumably, they begin living together would be very interesting. I would love for you to explore this theme again, even if it isn't with these exact characters. I must want it more than a sequel to Sibling Psychic Detectives since I actually made a comment for the first time.

Anyway, thank you for staying active, and for this story.

Another top notch story and for that, thank you! I have noticed that with your stories being related to something taboo like incest or being with a transgender like this story there is a romance that's relatable to real life there and it breaks down and sweeps away societies poor outlook on these things. It becomes a love story and reassures the reader that if it makes you happy then go to it and that is truly 5 star quality.

I’ve seen a lot of porn in my day, and I have to say, out of literally ever video and picture and story, this is my favorite. I love character development in all forms of media, and you nailed that with the dialogue in this story. I relate so heavily with Kylie. I know that you mostly write incest, but I would love to see you work more in this category. Thank you for the amazing combination of eroticism and emotionalism, and I really hope to see more work of yours for years to come. Truly, thank you.

I agree with other comments that the character development is great and the descriptions of sex vivid. I would love to read more of this story.

Loved this, just really loved it. I get sick of stories having no development or plot, and this moved so wonderfully slowly that it had me captivated and wanting more. Love your style or writing, please keep producing works of this quality.

Thank you xoxo

Love the parts that it wasn't just bout the sex. Love is way underrated in most of these stories. It's headed for a great relationship with lots of sexy times. It got me going in my feelings.

Fantastic writing, it was impossible not to read every word. Nothing was hurried and the characters developed really well, not once was I tempted to skip any parts and the sex came naturally and was neither harsh or crude in its depiction. Amazingly well writing & was a pleasure to read, you are to be commended for such an excellent story where I genuinely cared about the characters.

I have been searching for a Trans story exactly like this one for so long... They usually get lost in the mix and I've been meaning to find something like what you accomplished.

The idea of someone transitioning having these self-conscious behaviors that don't just disappear because the boyfriend says she was beautiful (even if he meant every word) is so important and you nailed it.

Great work, just wish it kept going now that they were completely in love. Let me pile on the pressure for a part 2! Cheers.

I've recently started putting the "bones" of a story somewhat like this together, though told from the opposite side od the relationship. I found myself entranced by this work of pure art.

You, my good friend have given me a bar to strive for. I can only hope that I manage to even approach half of what I've just read. Thank you.

Brynn

What a wonderful story. Nice amount of sex but more so there was a tender emotional side which I really enjoyed. So many stories on here are forced sex and cruality. This was just nice. Thank you.

I would give it a 10 if I could.

This is an amazing love story 2 people in love and supporting each other would live to read more you nailed it perfectly, not just about sex but people you grew to care about and wanted to be together loved it

I understand why I added you to my favorite authors after reading one of your stories. This was such a great read, even if this subject matter isn't my favorite. By the time I was done, I could see the attraction to the subject.

Very well done, with passion and compassion. Even in something slightly "taboo" there can be loving feelings, and some normalcy.

I agree both characters seem old beyond their years, but had that spark of youth I remember from when I was in high school. This actually brought up feelings I remember with my HS girl friend, without the trans factor. 50+ yrs later, she's still in my heart and thoughts.

Thanks, AJ

thank you so much for this!!! A terrific story...and very well written!!! I ope they co tinge to find happiness together!!!!

Had me captivated throughout, beautiful story, please continue....

Man, after reading this story I feel like a wrung out dish towel. What a special story about two people finding love for each other, given the mountain of obstacles in their way. The give and take dialog between the two high-schoolers was just about perfect. I really wasn't ready for the story to end, but as all good things do, it did. At least it was left on a high and hopeful note.

This went immediately into my favorites folder with the few stories that are honored to be there. My mission how it to check out all the other stories written my Xarth. Thanks for writing and post such a splendid story.

BTW, I loved the part when Carter was playing with Kyle's panties, go figure :)

Jesus, this story has made my cold dead heart flutter for seemingly the first time in years. Carter and Kylie feel like two of the richest characters I’ve read in a while! Thank you, Xarth, for the genuinely moving story, it won’t be one I forget soon!

So good, beautiful and adorable and super relatable

Totally relatable and highly erotic in oh so many ways. I've read it twice and can already tell I'll be back for another read! More please!!!