All Comments on 'Secrets Untold Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
really?

just like that he now wants to do his aunt/grandma... for no reason other than she's there because he for sure never thought about it until the squirrel logic light bulb went off in his pants. a good story makes sense when you sell the idea not just when you write something down as filler or decide that two is better than one and randomly throw someone else on the guy's cock. i didn't exactly expect this story to be literature, but this would have been less painful to read if it was a stick figure drawing comic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Next please!

very hot next chapter please!

Jack2303Jack2303over 11 years ago
Really?

I'm really not liking that Mike is a cheater, grieving widow or not...I thought "grandpa" already went over this...I'm trying to give it a chance but the series has sort of fell short of fully developing. At least that's my opinion, but as they say, their like assholes, everyone's got one.

Rancher46Rancher46over 1 year ago

Wow, now the story is getting a bit convoluted, 5/5

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