All Comments on 'Secrets Untold Ch. 03'

more please is very erotic!

Hope they all will be able to be together

i hope that there will be more. i cant wait!!

Hi I love your story! I hope michael and rachel stay together without their aunt/grandma. She lied and well I don't like her . I thought it was romance, and I hope those two get their happy ending without beth. Maybe someone else with beth..or find someone else for rachel it seems a good payback after what they did ) michael sure has to fight for her if everything goes wrong. Your first story with them was really good, I love how it was when it is just them and no one else.

I loved Michael and Rachel's story but now I don't like Michael much you carry to romanticize it all you like but Michael is a cheating husband looking to justify his actions I hope rachel leaves him is there some reason why its so hard to find monogamy on incest seriously love is love and should be about two people who are faithful I mean didn't Michael swear that he only wanted Rachel almost loved it at least I loved the first series

So, I've already complained about the storyline failing to develop (romance and sex is lacking details), but I have to acknowledge the idea of a dominate Michael taking the lead is hot, though it would've been easier for me to like him if he had come clean about the photo and the kiss after they happen...Also, why does Beth keep saying that its been so long? Dude, your lover/brother/spouse was only dead for a week...and why is there this sudden attraction that never existed before? Smh...I guess you win some and you lose some :)

I loved this story and how sweet and romantic it's always been, but after this chapter hate the direction you've just taken it. I don't like Micheal anymore and hope Rachel leave him. She deseves better than a cheater! I use to love the grandma but now I dislike her. I don't like the person you've made her into. This ruined the whole story for me. I'll be removing it from my favorites. Such a bummer.

I like this story. I wish you would have one other chapter to tie up the lose ends.

What? Fuck, this is what you get when you do not pay to read. The sweet romantic story degenerated into a cheating/domination garbage. I am glad the writer never finished this sequel. One of the worse I ever read.

Story is getting interesting, where will all of the relations end up. 5/5