by Leader12
Please continue the story. Would like to see how his ex and daughter take to the new couple. Very hot so far!
This feels weird. He's pretty sure she cheated on him and then left him for another guy, but there's no emotion there at all? I'm not sure where any of this is going, or the point of the narrative.
The plot is odd.
Met a girl and had great sex. Married her and raised a kid but then my wife went off me. She might have been cheating but we're okay now we have divorced. Oh, and then this young chick threw herself at me and I had more sex.
Somehow I can not really get into this story. Well written and some really great lines. Just hard to keep the characters straight and my interest up.
Bottom of page 1 - "Marissa's family had money and she had a trust fund, so the kids grew up in a very nice lifestyle."??
Isn't Marissa the daughter of the main character of the story?