All Comments on 'Seducer or Seducee'

Very well written, thank you for sharing

Exceptional. I hope for a sequel about their deepening relationship, perhaps with Emma moving in for good.

Very nice. I like how the attraction was drawn out. Would've liked a little more detail during the first time together, however still a very sexy story.

Another great story....a tad lengthy for male concentration...but top tale telling...

i have no more to say

I adore your style and construction. x

I enjoyed how the seduction was streched out. It made it seem more real. Hope there is a sequel!

Seducee! Definitely! I love meeting other women and allowing them to think they are seducing me. It makes for some exciting moments of "touch, oh dear, what are you doing" all the time knowing that it will all happen! Its my kink I suppose.

You have "the Voice". You get into the subject & hold the reader. Amazing, as Dutch is your mother tongue, rather than English! Keep it up!

'Sammy undid her blouse and I pulled my white tee shirt and pink vee-necked sweater over my head.'

Sammy? Emma, you mean?

Ordinary errors are not distracting enough to pull you out of the story, but this one is. Suddenly thinking, "Hang on, is there another person here? What did I miss?!" ... is very distracting.