All Comments on 'Seduction'

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CrownedSunCrownedSunalmost 11 years ago

VERY well written; I loved it. :D Needs a second part about the fling with Samantha, heh, which I'm inferring came about at some point during the play.

Wingwalker69Wingwalker69almost 11 years ago

Really nice story, well crafted. As already suggested, Samantha needs to be next....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Pretentious Narrator

Sex scenes are good, writing flows, but the narrator totally turned me off. She's so pretentious. There's a way to express feeling out of place and then there's looking down on your colleagues. If that is intentional, then you definitely did a great job and I look forward to reading more character development.

josephstevensjosephstevensalmost 11 years ago
Good as Usual!

Nice tale, well told...up to the expected standard! Thank you...

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