by Lord_Mountbatten17
Congratulations on your first story. Hello...let's have sex...too me it was rushed but other readers will disagree. To each their own. Good luck with your future stories.
Was a bit over the top with her daughter taking nap in the same house. But is a sorry,doesn’t have to be factual. Good work on first story.
its was good.. but seemed like missing some details... is she married? was the daughter drugged or in on it... whats up with intros when shes her daughters best friend and have met before at the pool party...
Love the spitting in mouth... kept picturing obedience movie scene.
and i agree with comment.. male oriented... still good though! keep it up.
Really? If this isn’t some teens wet dream written while jerking off in his mothers basement I’ve never seen one. He hs. It’s not even close to being real