All Comments on 'See Through Me Ch. 01-02'
by joodle
- 4 Comments
Anonymousover 6 years agoNever ever change the narrator unless you are literary gifted and even then it often is an unforgivable sin. It makes the story totally uninteresting. It is like playing both sides at chess.
SongCNalmost 6 years agoJesus haven't you read Bass-Ackwards? Multiple perspectives work fantastically in that story. (As in Midnight's Children, Dracula, Les liaisons dangereuses...)
Meadowlark0312almost 6 years agoI really appreciate the usage of dual narrators. I like having the insight to both of their thoughts and desires. I got invested in this story right away and read it in full. I REALLY appreciate how you closed the story with no ambiguity. Thank you and keep on writing! <3 <3 <3
Anonymousabout 3 years agoI read this years ago and have been praying to the Lit gods that I'll come across it again. Thank you for sharing this with us!
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