All Comments on 'Senior Trip Ch. 01'

FUCKING AWESOME - I wanted and came to that story twice, amazing descriptions and FUCK i want to be a step dad

He should have all the girls call him daddy from now on.

I don't usually give 5 stars in reviews...

Not because there are not some very good writers/stories on here, rather because if everyone gets 5 stars then its just ordinary.

5 Stars should reserved ONLY for the very Best Stories!

(like this one.)

S.

I'm going to read this again and again.

Nothing wrong with how it was written, but there should have been a clear warning explaining that it is a cuckold/humiliation story. It's a very specific kink that most people get turned off by.

Another MSX classic! Loved it! Five stars and a favorite point!

I really enjoyed your story, I am going to have to read more stories by you!

DAMN NICE!!!

Awesome eroticism. Keep it cumming!

Five PLUS Stars

Great story love the girls helping dad mmmm

Me & my sister love to have our dad to do us , Mom liked the break of it and I like the feel of him swelling in me and filling me . As we got older we had Dad more often .

He was our first and best till I got married at 19 .

Not sure which turned me on more, the fact that he got to fuck 4 hot little teenage cunts, including 2 being his daughters, or the fact that his wife wanted him to fuck her daughter and their daughter. Damn. Wish I had a daughter and wife like that.

I hope there is more to cum

That was so fucking hot! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Great story. Interesting set up and really hot sex. Well done!

I hope they fuck him in the ass with strapon dildos until he screams like the little feline bitch he is. Oh yeah!! Der bottom! Fill 'er up with Ethel! Ethel Merman, that is! Ohhh, he farted in their faces. Now he's gonna get plugged by their plastic weiners!!

I'd be pissed if I was that dad. His family has conspired to completely overthrow his entire existence. They aren't treating him with any respect, and they are lying to him. The scene at the window has them playing him for a fool.

I also wouldn't trust the wife anymore, especially if I felt that she had corrupted my daughter. I can see that he would have slept in the plane rather than join the girls, and have the plane ready to leave in the morning so he could head back straight to a lawyer and initiate a divorce. I would recommend a complete rewrite of the opening of the story, because I'm having a hard time (pun not intended) suspending my disbelief that this story could actually happen as presented.

OMG this made me so hot an oh so very horny I a not a dad in real life but if I had daughters like this an friends of there's I'd be fucking them all the time especially if my wife said it was ok.

Just starting, but this should be the start of a lovely btb in loving wives. Finding out your wife runs around naked with other men without hubby knowing is exactly right for divorce and revenge.

Its not the actual act but the deceit of doing it behind his back, knowing he would not like or approve.

Hope he gets to fuck the girls first before chapter 2 goes to loving wives for the entertaining portion.

Very nice setup and the descriptions were so hot. I definitely need more.

Had to stop reading this story of a sorry excuse for a male. Forget the btb, he should just hop in his plane and let auto pilot fly till runs out of fuel. Wife and their daughters have no respect for him, why bother living.

Wife cuckolds him, convinces their daughters this is normal and for them to fuck him. All perfectly acceptable as wife wants to fuck strange dick. He cant complain if he is getting some too.

Could not get past stupid hot tub scene, with the obvious prostitute doing him, while daughters and friends show their prostitute skills. How could it be sexy to watch your daughter with a srranger?

Once again you have worked your magic with words and come up with another great story!!

I agree somewhat with ultimatehomebody. Except I would just load the kids onto the,go home and serve the wife with divorce papers. And yes the hot tub seen was a bit weird.

I HOPE YOU CONTINUE THE STORY.

We need to finish how the girls ended the day.

The writing was good but the Dad was such a pushover that it offended it me that he was getting pushed around

What man would not have a FANTASY as perfect as this?

Four lovely and sexy girls all wanting to be fucked until they pass out.

I re-read the story just to dream about the fun.

I hope we have day 2.

That's all I said the entire time I read this. Don't get me wrong, it was HOT but Damn can you put some realism in the plot. The sex and sexiness was great it's the plot I can't wrap my head around. How does a conservative monogamous widowed/remarried prude 1) Somehow unknowingly get remarried to an incestuous believing in hedonist with a screwed up moral compass and 2) Go from that to ok with even if still slightly unsure with all that took place what happened that night at the hotel???? I mean seriously! I know its fantasy and all but my biggest problem with most of the stories of this type are how quickly their beliefs and morals crumble. Is it too much to ask for an actual fight for what they are suppose to believe in, I mean none of them ever truly put up a believable fight? I know it would make the stories longer but I think it would be worth it to read something a little more real. I mean If I was the father the way you wrote it the storied would have never happened because as soon as the girls started to force him to stay in the room I would have laid down the law, things go my way or we leave period and then the blackmail thing that would have backfired on them big time for me, because if the choice is to have sex with the girls or let my wife have sex with who knows how many boys I would have told everyone to pack their shit right then left dropped the friends off at their house dropped the step daughter of to her mother and forced my daughter to go with me and tell that bitch of a wife that if she so much as made contact with my daughter I'd press charges of incest against her and she'd hear from my lawyer shortly but no this supposedly hard working confident morally strong "real man" crumbled to the will of 4 self conscious inexperienced girls pretty though they maybe that he promised to protect and take care of 2 of which are his daughters. Does that sound right to anyone really?!? I'm sure there is a way that the story could play out to make it more realistic it would have to take a lot longer and a lot less conniving and a lot more explaining and maybe some guilt tripping or something even but this?!? no way NO NO NO NO NO

I just want to know what was in the water - I want some.

And his wife are just a plot device but it still pisses me off. Unfortunately, that made the story less enjoyable for me. Still worth 4* from me.

Phil

" Honey. You love knowing that you're the only one between my legs. I'm fine being that because you give me everything I need in that way. But if you're not going to give the girls what they need to know, I'll have to teach their boyfriends so they do. I can't do that without letting them in, now can I?"

"You'd what, screw them until they did it right? Well, I got to get of the phone I have to contact a divorce lawyer and see about getting a protection order against you. If you think I'm going to let you twist my daughter and if I can my step daughter, into some twisted incest freak like you you truly know nothing about me like I obviously truly know nothing about you."

That's how that conversation should have gone with the way the character of the father was written. I saw this story 2 years ago. I couldn't finish it.... guess what I couldn't this time either, if anything it was worse now. great writer bad story plot.

The wife threatening him like she did ruined the whole story. Divorce papers, please!

Daddy's wife is a slut like Jenny!! Naked around the daughter's boyfriend...really

If this kind of manipulation happens to a women, it’s called rape. It’s rape if a man is manipulated. All of the women are selfish.

And now for a visit to Room 316 !

I seem to run into this story every couple years and as I said the last time it's all still true. Great writer, terrible story.

As long as I gave up trying to make sense of anything the wife said it was one of the best fantasy romps with horny teen girls.

Blackmailing her husband into having sex with his daughter and hers? Despicable.

The fact that the events were all prearranged kinda takes the story down a couple of notches. Would have liked it to have been more of the dad's idea with the girls being just a little reluctant . . . .