by Grouchojim
Great character development and narrative, Good use of imagery. Excellent!
Perfectly wonderful. Could You append sometime the sexual history of Miss Ginger including her first name?
First name was "Ginger" the children she tutored were told to call her Miss Ginger. I hope that helps.
But it does have that Victorian feel to it in a good way.
First love, always best when presented by one who cares for you and is willing to teach you how to love them. A very well thought out and written story, with all the angst, drama, love and sex put together in a very engaging manner. I definitely look forward to reading more. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.