All Comments on 'Sera Ch. 32'

...........that will work....not really.

Too much obsessed with being a loony Airhead.

I've never really gotten all this Looney or Retarded stuff came from. I guess the character development for her never really fleshed that out enough for me to grab a hold of or understand. This is fiction in any case.

Sheila's a better fit for Steven. Kitten? Not so much

this chapter. This interaction between father and daughter. Still feels like he got the raw deal though and could have been a bigger part of the story. But I am just happy you included them.

I really like the Langley clan, and now I feel better that there is closure and even understanding there. I would love to read in the epilogue that should be at the end of this wonderful tale. That both the Langley clan and the Burchels come to a 'closer' if not intimate relationship. I still have some doubts of Sera, but now it's more of can 'it' be controlled more than will Sera run amuck.

I feel sorry for Gena because she still has not been "fixed". She still has dark, faded memories of what was made to happen to her. She should have been cleaned up.